湖南省高三英语 书面表达复习重点话题指导 专题10 旅游探险类话题指导（教师版）.docVIP

湖南省长沙县实验中学2013届高三英语二轮复习书面表达复习重点话题指导专题10 旅游探险类话题指导（教师版） 【写作任务】 根据下列图表的提示，写一篇你在意大利罗马旅游观光的日记。 注意：词数为120――150。 2)向式结构。为使用有限的文字描述美丽的景点，也为了提高表达的质量，写作过程中要尽量多地使用复杂的句式结构，如： 1. 用含有时间状语从句的复合句表达“抵达地点以及感受”：I was attracted by the beauty of the city the moment we arrived the there at 7 o’clock in the morning by plane． 2. 用过去分词短语作状语，表达地点，并用定语从句补充说明其悠久的历史：Situated in the middle of the Italia Peninsula , Rome is well known for its cultural relics which have been there for a long history of 2，500 years． 用定语从句补充说明参观景点后的感受和收获：In the morning we visited Museo Nazionale Romano, where I enjoyed many precious and beautiful sculptures.以及we had a chance to visit the symbol of Rome, Colosseo, which is very beautiful in the setting sun.等。 3)篇章结构中的过渡与衔接词语。如：therefore，first ，then , finally , but等。 【学生习作】 May 1 st Friday Sunny 【教师点评】 1．亮点点击：该习作除了表达信息全面，语言准确之外，最突出的是篇章结构的安书。 文章介绍了到达地点和旅行方式后，接着介绍其地理位置和悠久的历史，，并描述了旅游业方面的突出成就：吸引着世界各地的游客来度假，尤其是春天，并把气候穿插其中。 接下来介绍旅游景点时，做到了言简意赅，用时间作为连接词语，层次分明，再用定语从句描述自 【参考范文】 May 1st Friday Sunn3 Today I paid a visit to one of the oldest cities in Europe, Rome in Italw I was attracted by the beauty:of the city the moment we arrived here at 7 oclock in the morning by plane. Situated in the middle of the Italia Peninsula, Rome is well known for its cultural relics which have been there for a long history of 2.500 years. Therefore, many tourists from all over the world would prefer to spend their holiday here, espe:ially in warm spring. In the morning we visited Museo Nazionale Romano, where I enjoyed many precious and beautiful sculptures. Then we went to enjoy the splendid building, of Triumphal Arch in the afternoon. Nearly at dark, we had a chance to visit the symbol of Rome, Colosseo, which is very beautiful in the setting sun. It was time for us to leave for another city, but I really think that Rome is well worth a second visit offe d