高级英语写技巧.ppt

正文部分 怎样写好正文部分？ 一致性 发展性 连贯性 一致性（Unity） 文章中所有的内容都要围绕着文章的中心思想。 Turning Failure into Success Too much emphasis on success is not a good thing. (thesis in introduction) P2. Certain kinds of success can indeed be destructive. the danger of too success I particularly acute. I recall from my childhood a girl whose skill on ice skates marked her as “ Olympic material” while the rest of us were playing, bicycling, reading and just loafing, this girl skated– every day after school and all weekend. Years later, however, she spoke bitterly of those early triumphs. “i never prepared myself for anything but the ice, she said, “ I peaked at 17—and it’s been downhill ever since.” P3.Success that comes too easily is also damaging. The child who wins a prize for a carelessly-written essay, the adult who distinguishes himself at a first job by lucky accident faces probe disappointment when real challenges arise. P4.Successs is also bad when it’s achieved at the cost of the total quality of an experience. Successful students sometimes become so obsessed with grades that they never enjoy their school years. They never branch out into tempting new areas, because they don’t want to risk their grade-point average. 主题句 支持句1 支持句2 支持句3 发展性（development） 发展性就是要充分发展段落的主题思想。通过不同的角度，用详尽的事实例证来说明。 例1 For many people, absence of work is harmful to their health. Obviously if you have nothing to do, your health will be affected. Work is one wa to keep you healthy. If you don’t work, it will do harm to your health . Just imagine, you stay at all day, doing nothing your health will be declining. Without work, without good health. So doing nothing will be harmful to one’s health. For a large number of people, the absence of work is harmful to their health. Retirement often brings many people surrounding the “what do I do with myself today?” question, even though there may be no financial cares. Large numbers of people regularly get headaches and other illnesses on weekends when