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2013专四写作预测终极版本 1题目：Work While Study 写作要求 In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using speci?c reasons and details. 审题思路 本题是一道观点选择型A/B 的题 目，论述在校青少年打工是否适合 ，本题可以从 以下 两方面入手 ： 思路1：青少年应该打工虽然打工会 占用他们 的时间 ，但也可以为他们带来好处 ：1……2……3…… 思路2 ：青少年不应该打工虽然打工会有一定 的益处 ，但是弊端更多 ：1……2……3…… 范文赏析 Work While Study In many countries it is common for teenagers to take part-time jobs while they are still in high school, while in other societies this is virtually unheard of. n my opinion, students bene?t more from a more balanced lifestyle, which may include working at a part-time job. Therefore, I believe that it is a good idea for students to work while studying. 引言部分：作者先提出这个争议的话题 ，并开门见山地亮出自己的观点：青少年打工是有益的。 While it is true that a student’s most important goal must be to learn and to do well at his studies, it does not need to be the only goal. In fact, a life which consists of only study is not balanced and may cause the student to miss out on other valuable learning experiences. In addition to bringing more balance to a student’s life, part-time work can broaden his range of experience. He will have the opportunity to meet people from all walks of life and will be faced with8 a wider variety of problems to solve. Furthermore, work helps a student to develop greater independence, and earning his own pocket money can teach him how to handle his finances. Finally, a part-time job can help a student to develop a greater sense of responsibility, both for his own work and for that of the team he works with. 主体部分 ：作者采取了欲扬先抑的做法 ：先肯定学生的主要任务是学习，然后驳斥那种把学习当作学生惟一目标的观点，并列举了学生打工可以目标的观点，并列举了学生打工可以列举法的配合使用使作者的观点非常有说服力。 For all of these reasons, I ?rmly believe that most students would bene?t from taking a part-time job while they are in high school. Of course, they must be careful not to let it take up too much of their time because study is still their primary responsibility. 总结部分 ：?作者用for all of these reasons 做承上启下的连接，并再次