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2016年高考试题分项解析之专题10书面表达 1.【2016·全国新课标I】书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format） 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。 【答案】 Dear Ms Jenkins, I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor. In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I havealready finished my application and resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can do me the favor. Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【名师点睛】 本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In order to get some practical experience,、现在分词短语hoping you can give me some help、宾语从句if there are something to pay attention to等。经典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume也是文章的亮点所在。 2.【2016·全国新课标II】书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括： 1．主题：环境保护； 2．展览时间； 3．投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow@. 注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【答案】 Dear Peter, Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know youtake good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that themethe last time you visitedour school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, youcan send your photos to intlphotoshow@. Hope to hear from you soon. Y