原创力文档 Word-guessing game Text Structure 1. What is the controversy about animal intelligence? (Para1) 7.The first animal-Colo (Para3-4) 8.The second animal-Chantek (Para5-6) 8.The second animal-Chantek (Para5-6) 9.The third animal-Orky (Para7-10) 10. The fourth animal-Melati (Para11) 11. The fifth animal-Towan (Para12) Text Structure Language Points: 1. controversy 2. surround 3. explore 4. serve one’s purpose 5. encounter 6. reveal 7. convince 8. negotiate 9. maintain 1). Make sure that all the examples are relevant and persuasive 2). Choose typical examples: choose those most likely to convince your reader. 1. Heading and Subheadings Suggest to the reader the contents of each section Enhance the formal appearance of an essay Eliminate the need for wordy transitional devices between sections 2. Anaphora（前指） Then, using his tail to keep steady, Orky let the keeper reach up and release the 420-pound baby so that it could slide into the water within reach of help. Towan, the colony’s dominant male, watched this whole trick, and the next day he, too, looked Shewman in the eye and pretend that he had not yet received an orange. 3. Conjunctions Miles also tried to teach Chantek more virtuous habits such as saving and sharing . (para 6) Also: connect this paragraph with the previous one 4. Summarizing the main ideal of previous paragraph, and introduce new topic If and animal can show skill in trading one thing for another, why no in handling money? (para 5) 5. The stories they tell us reveal what Im convinced is a new window on animal intelligence: the kind of mental feats animals perform when dealing with captivity and the dominant species on the planet ─ humans. (L6) reveal: make sth especially secret known 展示, 显示; 泄露,透露 He was jailed for revealing secrets to the Russians. Her biography revealed that she was not as rich as everyone thought. 5. The stories they tell us reveal what Im convinced is a new window on animal intelligence: the kind of mental feats a
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