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利弊类主体维度让步正确性重要替代/解决现象类拆分举例原因分析（这个现象存在，根本原因是什么？）Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does. Sp 1. To begin with, what jobs bring us is the material satisfaction, which is the fundamental factor contributing to people’s happiness.Take my own experience for example. I was born in a most ordinary blue-collar family, and when I was ten, my father even lost his job because of the bankruptcy of his company. You can imagine what a harsh economic situation I was facing: my parents even took a bank loan to support to finish my college degree. I would always be sad in the face of the fact that I couldn’t dress up myself with beautiful dresses, shoes, and accessories, like other girls did.But everything changed after I started to work.As an investment banker in Morgan Stanley, I now earn a yearly income of about 400,000 yuan, which well supports almost all the material needs of myself. The nice apartment, cars and designer bags are no longer a luxury for me;in the end of the year I can also take my parents to travel to resorts such as Miami or Maldives. Thedifference between my life in the past and my life now is like the difference between the hell and the paradise. I’m indeed much happier because of the financial sufficiency. #钱的重要性#More importantly, what comes along with our job also includes the sense of achievement, which can hardly be brought by anything else. Here are some examples. A teacher, besides giving lectures in the class, also needs to spare much time to do the teaching research and to correct students’ mistakes in the homework. These can be really laborious sometimes.But once they see a rise in students’ academic performance—for example, a student might finally organize all the words into a sentence without grammar mistakes, teachers will feel that all the hard work finally pays off and that their efforts are indispensable. Likewise, doctors sometimes need to work overnight to conduct an operation for a patient. More often than not, t