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ShortIntro.template开门见山反方原因+反方观点+自己观点背景介绍+自己观点Body=topic sentence+ explanation+ example+ brief summarization conclusion段内展开之说理内容请注意；有必要说理才说。没必要就直接例子如果要说，必须规避无关信息解决方案：画逻辑图每个人有自己的兴趣可能有些人对历史毫不感冒强迫他们学习只会引起反感学习动力的缺失导致学习效率低 逻辑图中不要进行逻辑跳跃新东方老师好专业性技巧给力弯路少我的效率高老师好耐心解答各种问题好感上升—》动力效率高2. 语言并列说理：for one thing,… for another…also/besides/further/another factor is that/other than that/still/what’s more….对比说理however; on the other hand/on the contrary/in stark contrast/quite the opposite/but with B, it’s a totally different story. Books contain authoritative information. The authority of books brings about the correct knowledge. the accurate knowledge helps to reduce detours. The reduced detours contribute to higher efficiency. Because books are authoritative, they convey the correct knowledge. so we have fewer detours. Therefore the efficiency is higher. No. 51Because of books, we learn thing more consecutively. The Book makes the knowledge-learning constantly for its scientific. Then it’s easier to comprehend completely. So we can learn knowledge more efficiently. 词句串联副词No. 18Books are systematicness, so we can learn and understand knowledge consistently, comprehensively , and efficiently. 1）句句串联说理的语言表达（串联形式）你的懒惰导致了你的失败。 Your laziness leads to your failure. 人类的无情导致了自然环境的恶化。 因为人类很无情/冷漠/不友好/残忍，所以自然环境越来越糟糕了。Because human beings are cruel, the natural environment is getting worse and worse. 你得无知带来了你的无畏。Because you know nothing, you fear nothing.句句串联原因状语从句/结果状语从句Knowing nothing, you fear nothing.因为他被抢了，所以他没钱了。 robbed, he is left penniless. containing authorized information, books help us get access to correct knowledge. you know nothing, thus/thereby fearing nothing.organized systematically, books fill us in with consecutive knowledge, thereby promoting the learning efficiency. 定语从句you know nothing, which you fear nothing. You know nothing, because of which you fear nothing. There is a classroom, in which 80 students are having lectures. During practices, we have to spend excessive amoun