（陶文化）开放性作文2013献课.ppt-重庆市杨家坪中学.pptVIP

开放性作文写作初探 Chongqing Yangjiaping Middle School Tao Wenhua 重庆市杨家坪中学 陶文化 2013重庆高考书面表达 写作1 (满分15分) 本题为开放式作文，要求考生结合所给材料，按要求用英文写作，词数不少于60。 提供材料的形式有:文字、图画，图表等。 评分标准（1） 第四档 （12分 ---- 15分） 很好地达到总体要求 1.有效结合材料，观点明确 2.内容连贯，条理清晰 3.语言运用得体，词汇丰富，几乎没有语言错误 评分标准（2） 第三档 基本到达总体要求 （8分 ---- 11分） 1.有效结合材料，观点基本明确 2.内容基本连贯，有一定的条理 3.语言运用基本得体，有少量错误，但能表达观点。 （1）开放性小作文之---材料作文 3.审时态 please tell us what you did with the bird.在这个提示语中的did，决定考生在写作中应该用一般过去时态。 学生习作1 If I were Li Hua, I would try my best to save the bird. I would carefully put the bird into my soft hat to keep it warm. And then carried it to an animal hospital as soon as possible. I think doctors could help it. If the bird could live, I would carry back home and took care of it until it could fly back into woods. If it couldn’t live, I would bury it. I think whoever meets this thing will do just like I did. Everybody would like to see this bird family live happily together, isn’t it? 评语：审题错误 学生习作7 We tried to save the bird by giving it some water and food. And then we decided to take it to the animal hospital, but it was too late. After a short while, the bird couldn’t move at all and it was dead. So we dug a small hole and put the bird into it as a tomb. What a pity. 评语：内容连贯，条理清晰，有意义。 （2）开放性小作文之---图画作文 请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于60。 In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it. 图画作文的写作步骤 1. Describe the picture Possible version In the picture, between two closely-located buildings grows a big tree. Unlike most trees, this one bends in the middle , struggling all the way up to get more sunshine. ---- Describe the picture The picture reminds me of those who succeed in terrible conditions. Faced with difficulti