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INSTRUCTOR: YANG YANFENG DATE: 2010.10.18 CLASS: English education 6 NAME: 钟小红 STUDENT #: 2009154633 TOPIC: How to plant rose OUTLINE REVISION Thesis statement: A possitive attitude vs. a negative attitude. What is possitive attitude and what is negative attitude? Which One is better? Regarding to the chance of success. A possitive attitude makes people usually aware the good things and that will lead them to success. A negative attitude makes people fail. In terms of health. A.A possitive attitude is good for our health. But a negative attitude is on tne contrary. B.An example about a man who has a negative attitude suffer a dease and die quickly. To keep a possitive attitude is better. FIRST DRAFT SELF REVISION A negative attitude vs. a possitive attitude Facing a half bottle of watter,one person said :”it still have half bottle.”The other will said;the bottle is empty.”The former is possitive attitude and the latter is negative attitude.Which one is better for us ? Regarding to the chance of success,a possitive attitude makes people aware the good things which will give them opportunities and increase their confidence.And they will succeed in the end.However,negative attitude will always make them feel helpless and believe nothing.they will lost many opportunitise.At last,they fail. In terms of health,a possitive attitude help people usually keep a good mood that is good for our health.By contrast,a negative attitude make people often think of the bad side of things and they will easy to be angry or sad.It will lead them to be sick.There is a man who is misdiagnosed that he had a cancer and he will die 3 month later.He was devasted and had a lower mood all the time.He was waiting for the death.As a result,he died 2 month later. After the comparision,it is easy to find that a possitive attitude is better,not only for chance of success but also for health. SECOND DRAFT PEER REVIEW A negati