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智课网TOEFL备考资料最新托福独立写作范文解析 摘要： 托福写作经常出现新的题目，但是题材却始终都是那几种，因此考生在备考托福写作的时候只要针对几种常见题材进行练习便可以解答大部分题目，而备考托福写作最好的方法便是参考范文。 点击查看扫描二维码的方法 In order to attract more tourists, which should government do: to improve the safety by hiring more police or to repair old buildings and streets? 为了吸引更多的游客，政府应该雇佣更多警察以提升安保还是通过修缮旧城以改善市容? 【点题成金】 政府是否应该做某事，是典型的利弊分析题。警察部分考生略显陌生，但是传统建筑却是在 托福 独立写作题目中常出现的元素，因此建议考生本题从修缮旧建筑的角度进行论证。与此同时，考生需要注意此题和机经题目“保护历史建筑还是建新建筑” (Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings?) 略有区别，因为本考题已经提及了“吸引更多游客的目的”，所以展开应更多从游客本身出发。 考生首先想到的思路为基本思路，即从能够让游客获得更好的旅游体验出发，探讨修缮旧城如何能让游客更好地领略城市的历史和文化;第二点可以从修缮后的旧建筑出发，探讨其在改造后的新功能，考生非常容易联想的例子有798、新天地等;最后一点做“让步段”，可以比较两种不同决策的经济效益，进而巩固本文的观点。 【思路解析】 First, renovating traditional buildings will help tourists better appreciate the essence of city’s history and culture. Moreover, transformed neighborhoods can better serve other purposes, for example, they can be converted into galleries and hotels to attract more tourists. Undeniably, economic cost would be huge when it comes to preserving traditional buildings and upgrading old streets. However, when considering the revenue brought by the crowding tourists, people could just ignore the slight investment on renovation. 【范文段落】 该范文段落根据topic sentence + explanation + example 的格式，每一部分都对细节进行深度拓展，同时在语言上注重使用平行结构，供大家参考。 Moreover, regenerated neighborhoods can better serve as other purposes, for example, they can be converted into galleries or hotels to attract more tourists. After being renovated, traditional buildings could easily be developed for other new functions. To specify, aged factories could be decorated as fashionable studios and chaotic community altered into hotels, which would be ideal accommodation for tourists, especially those who are interested in learning more about the local culture. On the contrary, it is less attractive for tourists to appreciate the beauty of the city by wandering in the old and shabby str