段落的展开法.doc

段落的展开法 1．段落的设计 段落需要事先设计好。首先要定下一个主题或一个中心意思， 并用一句话表达出来(即主题句)；其次，选择有助于阐述这一中 心意思的例子或细节，把它们一一列出；最后，把这些细节按逻 辑顺序排好，一个段落的初稿就这样设计出来了。 初学者最好先写一个提纲。比方说，要写一个关于集邮的段 落，可以先写下这样一个中心句：“集邮是一个很有意思的业余爱 好”，然后列出下面几点： (1)邮票上印有美丽的图案； (2)邮票上印有历史人物的画像； (3)每当收集到过去未见过的邮票时，我总是格外高兴； (4)从收集的邮票里，我能学到不少知识。 当你重读以上写好的四点提纲时，也许会发现最后一点还是放 在前面更为合适。按照这个提纲，你可以写出下面的段落： Philately is an interesting hobby．Every time I open my albums and look at the stamps Ive collected over the years，I learn something new．On many of them are printed drawings or pictures of rare birds，animals，trees or flowers．Under a magnifying glass they look very beautiful， and they help to increase my knowledge of nature．On other stamps there are portraits of historical figures，such as Qu Yuan and Dr．Sun Yatsen, George Washington and Chester W．Nimits． Whenever I see an unfamiliar name，I will try to find some information about the person by consulting an encyclopedia. In this way I have come to know something about quite a few people who are famous for one reason or another．Some of my friends and relatives who know I am interested in stamps often show me used envelopes．If I see a stamp which I have never seen before or I haven’t got yet，I will ask them to give it to me，and it seems that they are always kind enough to oblige me．It is always a delight to add a new stamp to my collection，and the more stamps I have，the more interested I am in philately． 上面的这一段一开头就先提出一个论点点出集邮的好处， 随后举出实例加以说明。这里用的是以实例展开段落的方法。 2．按时间展开 讲故事或追述往事时最简单、也最清楚的表达方式就是按事件 发生的时间顺序来叙述。先发生的事情先讲，后发生的事情后讲。 My heart gave a leap when I heard the announcement that our train would soon arrive at its destination-Beijing． Like other passengers，I began to collect my things and put my mug，towel，atlas，apples，and other things into my bag．To the tune of a beautiful song the train pulled into the station and gently stopped by a platform．I walked out of the train and was carried forward by the stream of people into an underground