大学英语写作.ppt

大学英语写作 四级 大学英语写作评分标准 2分：条理不清，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有语法错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分：基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。 8分：基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。 11分：切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分：切题，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本无语 言错误。 评分的其他事项 1.卷面整洁。字体清晰，大小适中，合理利用空间。（每行10-12个字） 2.文字整洁。没有刺眼的语法，拼写错误，预计通顺。 3. 内容和语言的结合。言之有物，言之有理。 段落的写作 一.段落的基本结构 主题句 特点： 1）含有controlling idea （指作者的态度） 2）引出段落主题即topic （指这一段是关于什么的） 位置：段首：主题句+扩展句 2. 扩展句 3. 结尾句 二. 段落的展开 举例法 People can benefit a lot from raising pets. Firstly, people can derive happiness from raising pets. For example, no matter how you look and dress, your pet dogs always wag the tails, rub against you, purr or look at you with adoring eyes when you come home. In addition, people who own pet are healthier. A good case in point is that people’s blood pressure will fall when they stroke their pets. 常用的连词 For example, for instance, as an example, take…as an example, such as…, a case in point 2. 列举法 There are four or more ways to keep fit for everyone of us. Firstly, we should have our breakfast, such as milk, eggs, bread and so on. Secondly, we should have a short nap, even 30 minutes, at noon. Thirdly, sports exercises are necessary for everyone and we can do some sports exercises in the afternoon. And fourthly, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening to both popular and classic music. 常用连词 First，firstly，in the first place， first of all, in the beginning， to beginning with， to start with， second， secondly， third， thirdly， nest， besides， in addition， moreover， also， still， above all， most importantly， last， lastly， finally， eventually， last but not least， for one things…for another 三.分类法 Some books are to be tasted, others are too be swallowed, and some few to be chewed and digested; that is, some books are to be read only in parts; others to be read, but not curiously; and some few to be read wholly, and with diligence and attention. Some books also may be read by deputy, and extracts made of t