英语作文第二段.docVIP

The Writing of the 2nd Paragraph How to Write  the topic sentence I. The Writing of topic sentence (分)主题句的写法 ★ 主题句支持主旨句，并由段内其他句子 支持； ★ 主题句对段落而言要有概括力，而对主 旨而言要有体现力； 分主题的写作： ① 分主题= 论题( topic ) + 具体观点（主旨的某一具体体现） ①分主题= 论题( topic ) + 具体观点 E.g. 1： Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?（2006） 分主题； --Making friends online（论题） might result in lacking communication with friends in real life（具体观点）. --Making friends online（论题） may help us enlarge our circle of friends considerably（具体观点）. ①分主题= 论题( topic ) + 具体观点 E.g. 2： A Major Advantage/Disadvantage of Advertising on Television 分主题； -- The major advantage of TV advertising lies in its efficiency in message conveyance. -- The major disadvantage of TV advertising lies in its negative influence on young children. ② 观点不能过于宽泛 E.g. 3 --- Making friends online is helpful. 观点过于宽泛，可改为： --- Making friends online is helpful in broadening our friend circle. ② 观点不能过于宽泛 E.g. 4 The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood --- The first reason is that we need to keep a good mood. 观点过于宽泛，可将其具体化为： ---Firstly, we need to keep a good mood to build harmonious interpersonal relationship. ---We need to keep a good mood, first, to keep us healthy both physically and mentally. ② 观点不能过于宽泛 Exercises 1. Cellphone is very important to our life. (means of communication/ entertainment, way of getting information) 2. Women’s role is more difficult to play than that of men. (constant physical troubles; social troubles) ③ 分主题要有足够的概括性  (非论证过程或详细的描写) E.g. 5 ---Firstly, the most popular function of a cellphone is that we can send SMS to fulfill an instant contact with others. 观点为具体细节，非命题形式的论点，可改为： --- Firstly, communication is the most popular function of a cellphone. We can send SMS to fulfill an instant contact with others anywhere and at ay time. ③ 分主题要有足够的概括性  (非论证过程或详细的描写) E.g. 6 --- First, a 100-year-old man was reported to do physical exercise eve