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英语写作讲解 一 高考作文类型 A. 数据说明类文章 B. 提示议论文类文章 C. 看图说话类文章 二 影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素 1.语篇信息是否完整 2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。 3.是否使用高级词汇 4.是否使用复杂句 5 .卷面整洁,书写工整 三 写作中普遍存在的几个问题 . 一.写作态度不端正 1.用汉语拼音 2.抄袭阅读理解等，企图蒙混过关。 . 二.语言表达有错误，单词拼写不规范。 1.There were two persons stood there .→ There were two persons standing there. 2.Our hometown has taken place great changes.→Great changes have taken place in our hometown. 3.heared →heard falled →fell angerily →angrily . 三 要点有所遗漏 对策：彻底理解题意，看准答题要求，提前列好提纲。 . 四字数过少 对策：紧扣主题，在围绕中心的前提下适当发挥。 .五字数过多 对策：舍得删减无关紧要的内容或转化上文已经用过的语法形式，化繁为简。 六。语言使用不灵活，机械翻译，或汉语思维过于明显。 七。跑题 八。 书写过乱，或卷面修改涂抹过多。 九。缺少连接词，文章缺乏整体感和连贯性。 十。 乱用标点 四．写作基本步骤： 1. 仔细审题，列举大纲。 ２．围绕要点，写出句子。 ３．添加过度，确保连贯。 ４．先求正确，再求灵活。 ５．认真眷写，卷面整洁。 现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。 ６５％的学生认为 ３５％的学生认为 １．应该春游 １．不应该春游 ２．接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康 ２．高考临近，没有心情玩 ３．活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习 ３．春游耽误学习 例文： Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. 　Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and what’s more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examinations drawing near, they don抰 feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They can抰 afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies Can you list the outline of the writing? Key words: 1.introduction(topic): 高三学生（senior 3 students） 春游(go spring outing） 讨论（discussion） 2.body(supporting ideas): 接触自然（be close to nature） 呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air ） 精神放松（relax themselves ） 大脑休息（rest their brains ） 高考临近（ with college entrance examinations drawing near ） 没心情玩（do