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一、Appreciate the models A、Example Composition 假定你是李华，在一个英文网络论坛上，你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发贴（post）寻求帮助。请根据以下内容、写作要点和要求回帖。 写作要点： 1.告诉Grown-up要理解母亲 2.给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议 要求： 1.短文须写在答题卡指定区域 2.短文字数不少于80（不含写好的部分） 3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯 4.书写清晰、工整。Dear?Grown-up?, ?　　　?As?a?student?of?your?age, I?understand?your?situation?. I have read about your complaint that your mother always treats you as a seven-year-old boy_______从句?, which makes you feel uncomfortable _________从句because you will enter college this coming fall________从句. As to your problem, I have several suggestions to put forward as follows经典钻石句型. ??　　　To begin with（Initially）议论文不可或缺的逻辑性连接词, you should try to understand your mother, whose intention is to care for you________从句. Just as a famous person says, “Nothing非人称主语.can compare with the love from mother” In addition (Apart from this) 议论文不可或缺的逻辑性连接词, communicating properly with your mother_______做主语 contributes to_____恰到好处 solving the problem. The more you communicate with her, the better you will understand each other熟悉句型. Finally, it____ 主语is encouraged to resort to your friends or classmates when you have quarrel with your mother. ??　　　I do hope what I mentioned above can help you. Only by doing so, can you be friend with your mother soon_____句、_____从句，_______句. Do you agree with me? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??Yours ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Li HuaB、Full-mark Composition As is well known to us all, （_____从句）whatever parents do （_____从句）is for us children to grow up happily and healthily. So you should understand your mother, who loves you very much.（_______从句） For my suggestion, on one hand, it’s very necessary to get a chance to communicate with your mother（_____＿＿主语后置），which will help you know each other very well.(＿＿＿＿从句) On the other hand, doing things by yourself (＿＿＿＿作主语)can also show your mother that you are not a