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四级考试之翻译复习 武汉科技大学外国语学院读写教研一室 四级新题型考试应对：如何拿下中译英高分 1)首先，确定关键词(一般由两个词或词组组成)，寻找可能的英文相应表达； 2)然后，利用相应的语法结构或功能连接方式(connectives)将两个英文词或词组连接起来； 3)最后，结合待翻译的文字在句子中所处的位置与功能，根据句法结构理顺语言。 翻译题评分原则及标准（2011年6月） 1. 整体内容和语言均正确，得一分。 2. 结构正确，但整体意思不确切获信息不全，得0.5分。 3. 整体意思正确单语言有错误（包括用词不当），得0.5分。 4. 整体意思完全错误，及时结构正确也不得分。 5. 大小写错误，标点符号错误以及明显属于笔误但不影响辨认的拼写错误可以忽略不计。 阅卷判分实例（11.6） 84. The pills __________ (本来可以治愈那位癌症病人的）， but he didn’t follow the doctor’s advice and take them regularly. could have cured the cancer patient 1分： 1. could have cured that patient who suffered from/ got/ had /had got cancer. 2. would have cured that patient with cancer 3. could have cured the patient of his cancer(没his也对） 4. should have been effective in curing that patient with cancer（cancer sufferer） 0.5分 1 could have treated /recovered that man with cancer(意思不确切）（出现原型0分） 2. would have cured the ∧ patient (信息不全) 3. should have cure that paitent who had a cancer(语言错误) 4. was supposed to have cured the pation who had cancer(两处语言错误) 5. should be able to get the cancer patient back to healthy 0分 1. can cure the man who had cancer originally(语言错误，信息错误） 2. could have save the life that got cancer (语言错误，意思不确切) 3. would have healed the patient who was sick of cancer (意思不确切，局部信息有误) 4. cured that cancer patient of disease in advance (信息错误) 5. were used to cure the patient who has cancer 意思不确切，语言错误） 判分原则语言错误不累计，信息错误累计。 以上用词，man person guy均可以接受，但是people属意思错误。 实战演练 87. The substance does not dissolve in water _______________________ (不管是否加热). 　　[关键词]加热――heat；不管是否――(no matter) whether… or not 　　[连 接]heat与其逻辑主语substance之间需采用被动连接，即heat加ed。 　　[优 化]whether (it is) heated or not. ――注意，it is可省略。 　　[点 评]如果heated or not放在句首，whether也可以省略。 88. Not only ___________________________ (他向我收费过高), but he didn’t do a good repair job either. 　　[关键词]收费过高――overcharge, charge too much/high 　　[连 接]句首的Not only决定了倒装连接，下文用了过去时态，因此，这里需在he之前加did。 　　[优 化](Not only) did he charge me too much/high, / did he overcharge me, …。 　　[点 评]如果未能想出用ove