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智课网TOEFL备考资料托福写作用词使用亮点评析 摘要： 在托福写作考试中，成熟的英语语言能力会完全掌控你在写作中的效果，在托福写作考试中，只有在宏观和微观两个方面都把握得当才能构成一篇完美的TOEFL作文。这里的宏观是就一篇文章的框架结构而言的，而微观是指一篇文章的语篇要素，即文章中表达意义的微观单位，包括单词、短语和句子。 托福 写作用词的使用，表现的是一个考生的语言能力，准确的用词、会使 托福考试 写作比较增添光彩，今天小编就为整理 托福写作 用词使用亮点评析，我们一起来看看本文是怎么说的。 亮点评析 conviction的意思是“坚定的看法或信仰”，have a profound conclusion表示对某种看法深信不疑，作文中提出观点的句子用have a profound conclusion会比用believe态度更坚决，立场更鲜明，而且believe这个词非常简单，是英语初学者就应掌握的词汇，换成have a profound conclusion立即增加了句子的复杂程度，体现了较强的语言运用能力。类似的提出观点的表达还有： I hold a point of view that… I hold the opinion that… 6.Original: We know that sometimes success is measured by how much money you earn. Revised: It does not surprise us to discover that sometimes success is measured in terms of the money you earn. 亮点评析 如上句的believe一样，know也是非常初级的词汇，作文中出现I believe that…，I know that…这样的表达只能体现考生写作技巧的稚嫩，用It does not surprise us to discover that…替换We know that…并没有改变原句的含义，却使全句顿时增添了亮点。 7.Original: We all know that most factories would be of no use if there were not clean water supply. Revised: It goes without saying that most factories would be of no use if there were not clean water supply.Toefl 亮点评析 同上例一样，know这样的初级词汇应避免在作文中使用，It goes without saying that…是一个固定结构，意思是“……是不言而喻的”，常在作文中用来引经据典或表明一个尽人皆知的道理，类似的表达还有： An old saying goes that… Proverb goes that… It is universally acknowledged that… It is generally accepted that… 8.Original: Some other people think that people should read extensively. Revised: Another position says that people should read extensively. 亮点评析 同know，believe一样，think也应该尽量避免使用，修改后的句子中是用Another position says that…代替think提出另一种观点，也可以用hold a point of view，hold the opinion这样的短语替换。 9.Original: The unexpected win of the match give us confidence. Revised: The unexpected win of the match boost our confidence. 亮点评析 give也属于英语中最初级、最基本的词汇，只表示“给，给予”这个动作，不涉及动作的性质和状态，若表示增添信心，增强士气，比较地道的说法是用boost confidence/morale，如：The change of management has boosted morale throughout the company. 管理模式的改变使整个公司上下士气倍受鼓舞。 10.Original: The use of drugs has increased