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Our neighborhood has been greatly changed. When I last visited there, about half the homes had been torn down to make way for a super highway. The remaining buildings were plastered with billboards and surrounded by traffic signs and litter. Now the whole neighborhood has become dirty, noisy and full of cars． 主题句： Our neighborhood has been changed． 主题句关键词： changed 主题句隐含的问题：“How has the neighborhood changed？ 细节 1． a super highway built — noisy and full of cars 2． full of billboards, traffic signs and litter — dirty 结论句: Now the whole neighborhood has become dirty, noisy and full of cars． 结论句关键词： dirty，noisy and full of cars 结论句总结了细节并回答了主题句提出的问题。 好段落的特征 一个好的段落应该具有以下三个特征 1）完整性（completeness） 2）统一性（unity） 3）连贯性（coherence） 段落的完整性指的是段落得以充分展开。作者写好主题句，就应该用细节进行推展，细节越充足越好。 Riding motorcycles is dangerous. 你就应该用你所知道的事实证明这一观点是正确的。你可以使用数字（statistics），列举例子（example），进行描绘（descriptions）等等。 Ever since the time of the Greeks, drama has played an important role in mans lives. The Greek tragedies and comedies were a central part of the citizens lives in ancient Greece. During the Middle Ages, Bible stories were acted out in churches, and wandering companies of players performed in the streets. In modern times, drama is brought directly into peoples homes through the magic of television. 主题句 Ever since the time of the Greeks， drama has played an important role in mans lives． 细节 1． ancient Greece 2． the Middle Ages 3． modern times 作者根据各个不同历史时期提供细节，举例说明戏剧的重要性。 Exercise Directions: In the folowing sentence grouping, circle the letter in front of any detail that does not support the topic sentence． Topic Sentence My main satisfaction in life comes from the people who are part of my life． Supporting Details： a. For me a day is good or bad depending on whether or not I have gotten along well with my associates． b. I am not at all affected by the weather the way some people are． c. For instance, my father judges his day by whether or not the sky is blue． d. On a rainy day he is always i