2016中考英语书面表达备考.ppt

Head Beginning Body Tail Ending Beginning Body Ending Concluding sentence 结论句 Supporting sentence 支持句（例子、实事、数据或引文） topic sentence 主题句 开门见山，紧扣主题 总结观点，发表己见，首尾呼应 总 分 总 结尾通常总结文章主要观点, 或者发表自己的观点等等. 1. Cross-question(审题) Style (体裁） Person（人称） Tense（时态） 默读题目弄清要求,抓取有效信息,并适当分析。 健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。 牛刀小试 Cross-question(审题) visit friends or parents travel stay at home work Style (体裁）：__________ Person（人称）：_________ Tense（时态）: _________________ 调查报告，记叙文 第一人称 一般现在时 1. Cross-question(审题) 据实描写： 适当发挥： 度假方式 细节及提倡假日休闲 2. An outline drawing（概略图） List key points(列要点) Arrange and Add (布局加首尾) 如何度假 调查报告 倡议假日休闲 根据关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。 List key points visit friends or parents travel stay at home work 列要点时，内容、结构上不能有缺漏，如有漏点，扣分最多！ List key points 1.A lot of people travel. 2.Some people stay at home. 3.Some other people visit friends or parents. 4.A few people work. Enjoy your vacation. visit friends or parents travel stay at home work How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning） A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. (the key points) Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending） 加(add) 加首尾 总分总 3. Sentence Making and Beautifying word phrase sentence Beautifying 内容和语言表达 内容全面，表达有新意或亮点 3. Sentence Making and Beautifying（美化） word phrase sentence Beautifying How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.(the beginning) A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.(the ending) most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. 美(beautify) 方法一:善用意义相近的 高级词汇，避免行文单调 Which