2017年八年级英语下册Unit3Couldyoupleasecleanyourroom（第6课时）SectionB(3a-3b)同步作文指导课件（新版）人教新目标版.pptVIP

* Unit 3　Could you please clean your room? 第六课时　Section B (3a-3b)—单元同步作文指导 本单元以“家务和许可”为话题，围绕家庭中的日常事务展开，引导学生学习并掌握情态动词could表示委婉地请求许可的用法。结合本单元短文所讲内容“青少年在家应不应该做家务”，具体到书面表达中，要求同学们会写有关议论的短文，即议论文。 议论文有三要素：论点、论据和论证。中学阶段英语议论文结构相对固定简单，通常为： 1．在导语部分开门见山，直接提出要讨论的问题； 2．在正文部分对所提问题进行事例论证； 3．在结尾部分进行总结、归纳，并提出自己的观点。 写议论文时常用的相关短语和句型： ①引出议论的相关表达方式： These years，some students are interested in...近年来一些学生迷上了…… Some parents think...一些家长认为…… The students of our class have different ideas about...我们班的学生在……方面有不同的观点。 ②用关联词和相关句型列举事实依据，采用正反对比或归纳推理的方法，证明所持观点的正确性或表明所持的态度。 I like...but I hate...我喜欢……但是讨厌…… For example，...例如，…… First，...Second，...Third，...首先，……第二，……第三，…… ③用总结性语句来强调和重申提出的观点。 In a word，...总之，…… In my opinion，...在我看来，…… As we know，...正如我们所知，…… Whats more，...更重要的是，…… Do you like doing housework？I like doing housework.I will help my mother do housework when I am free.Because I think parents are very tired after a days work.I want them to have a good rest.I often help clean room，wash dishes，take away the rubbish and so on. Last Sunday，my mother was on duty.She must go home late.So I wanted to try to make dinner.I boiled some noodles first.Then I cut up some tomatoes and broke two eggs.Put them into the noodles.When my mother came back home，I had already made two bowls of noodles with tomatoes and eggs.My mother was surprised and happy.She praised me.I was happy，too. 【点评】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求，叙述了自己一次做家务的经历。首先这篇短文的内容非常完整，有头有尾，要点全面；其次短文结构清晰，层次分明；而且这篇短文使用了正确的时态和人称，符合英语的表达规范。作者写作时，还使用了较为丰富的句型，如时间状语从句和原因状语从句，使得整篇短文意思流畅、连贯。 你的看法：…… 3.做家务是父母的事情。 3.做家务可以体验父母的辛苦。 2.学习任务繁重，没有做家务的时间。 2.做家务可以培养吃苦耐劳的精神。 1.学生的任务是学习而不是劳动。 1.学会如何照顾自己。 没有必要(70%) 有必要(30%) Is it necessary for students to do housework at home？We did a survey about this. According to the result，we know most of the students think it is unnecessary for students to do housework. They think it is the job of their parents.As students，their duty is to study hard.They have no time to do housework because of the heavy homework.On the other hand，some st