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引用 ....... That is how sb. Commented ( criticized/ praised...) ....... How often we hear such words like this 讲故事 …，this story is not rare. ..., such dilemma we often meet in daily life. ..., the story still has a realistic significance. 提出原因 Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involve... The first reason that can be obliviously seen is…Some people may neglect/overlook that ... Part of the explanation is ... 进行利弊对比 The advantages of A outweigh the disadvantages . Although A enjoys a distinct advantage ...  Indeed , A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned. A maybe ... , but it suffers from the disadvantage that... 承上启下 To understand the truth of ..., it is also important to see... A study of ... will make this point clear 让步  Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as... I do not deny that A has its own merits. Thank you for watching!!!! 具体（在社区建工厂） 理由一： 建造新的工厂促进经济发展 理由二： 可以招收更多工人促进地区就业（好） 单一： It is more economical, more healthful, and more enjoyable for people to live in the country than in the city. 不好，应分成3段： …country life, …city life 富有新意： 注意： 不涉及 政治、宗教、战争和 一些犯罪话题， 观点别太激进或是绝对化 理由安排要自然，富有逻辑 （never, never give up一题） 例子的选取： 避生就孰（题材、用词） （城市乡村一题）不“测谎”， 哪个了解、哪个好写就写哪个 具体有生活气息 ? 结尾段 （conclusion） “锦上添花” 还是 “狗尾续貂”？ 包含内容： 一,是概括功能（概括全文，做出总结）；二,是呼应功能（和开头呼应） 结尾段的方法：7种，巧妙的将开头重复paraphrase，而不是copy. 第1种 归纳法：总结全文要点 For what has been discuss above, we may safely make/ draw/ reach/ come to/ arrive at the conclusion that … 第2种： 提出建议、号召行动 It is hoped/suggested/recommended that great efforts should be made to control/ check/ promote the growth/ increase/ rise of… 第3种： 提出警告、后果 It is necessary that effective actions/ steps/ should be taken to prevent the situation/ phenomenon. It is, therefore, apparent/ clear/ obvious that the task of …requires…immediate attention. 第4种： 预测未来 常在社会、环保、科技 问题上使用 Indeed, with the … advance/ progress such as…, it is likely t