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大学英语四级考试优秀范文 Part 1:2010年12月 1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2.为了让孩子独立，父母应该…… How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent ①It is beyond reproach that children are always considered the apple of parents” eyes ,which is especially true in single-child families. ②However ,many parents go so far as to take over everything for their life and study even to their future. ③It is not unusual to witness that an increasing number of children are accompanied by parent on their first day in college. ④I declare in no uncertain terms that it will end up with the children” s lack of independence .In such a world full of fierce competition ,being independent becomes essential for a would-be success .Thus ,⑤what should parents do ? In my humble opinion, ⑥on the one hand ,parents should raise children in a free-ranging way instead of being “helicopter” parents, who always seem to hover over their children;⑦ on the other hand ,parents should teach children to be responsible for their own behaviors instead of monopolizing everything .⑧I cling to the belief that only when parents realize what is better for their children and care them in a right way ,can they help children develop independence. 精彩点评：①引入话题：孩子是父母的掌上明珠。②自然过渡：但是，有些父母却为孩子包办一切。③引用生活中的实例，证实父母为孩子包办并非空穴来风。④分析包办所带来的后果。⑤提出问题：父母应该如何做？⑥和⑦具体阐述解决问题的策略，层次分明。⑧简要总结前文所提的具体侧咧，是文章结尾不显突兀。 加分亮点：beyond reproach 无可非议 be accompanied by…有……陪同 declare in no uncertain terms 毫不讳言 fierce competition 激烈的竞争 essential 至关重要的 cling to the belief 坚信 Part 2:2010年6月 1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2.出现这种现象的原因是…… 3.为了改变这种状况，我认为…… Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling Nowadays,① an increasing number of students seem to attach less importance to spelling in English learning .②Thus ,numerous misspellings appear in their papers, ③and what ”s worse , a well-organized essay is therefore totally impossible. ④There are various reasons responsible for this embarrassing situation. ⑤For on thing ,much more students give priorities