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Assignment 1 遇见你，命中注定。 You are my destiny. 语义问题：译文意为“你是我的命运”，而原文强调的是“遇见你”这一动作，与原文不符。 改译： It is my destiny to meet you. I am destined to meet you. I am doomed to meet you.? 2. 我希望活得有意义，活得深刻，汲取生命所有的精髓。 I wanted to live deliberately，live deep and suck out all the marrow of the life. （Walden） 语法问题：原文中的动词wanted用了过去式，过去式指的是在过去的时间内所发生的事情，从原文中了解到这种渴望和希望应该经常存在，故用一般现在时want比较合适。 语义问题：deliberately有两个意思，分别是“done in a way that was planned, not by chance”和 “slowly and carefully”, deliberately 并不符合有意义的意思。deep可以指物理意义上的深，情感上的深厚，知识的渊博，人性格深沉，这里指生活态度不恰当。尽管deep也有做副词的时候，但多用于deep inside，deep into这种情况，在这里用deeply才是正确的。而且此处用profoundly更好，语气更强，更能体现出活得深刻的意味。 文体问题：“汲取”在文中具有象征意义，指的是“学习”生命的意义。suck out指的是吮吸，只是单纯的动作。marrow象征的是生命中的智慧，而marrow是生物上骨髓的意思。 改译： I wanted to lead a meaningful and profound life, from which I receive all the wisdom of life. 3. 我存在，我曾经存在。 I am，I was. 电影“Artificial Intelligence”，I am, I was. I think, so I am. (Decarte) 改译： I am here, I was here. ??? I exist, I ever existed. ??? 4. 有想做的事，有值得爱的人，有美丽的梦。 I want something to do, someone to love and something to hope for. 语义问题: Someone to love指有一个人去爱，但原文中是“有值得爱的人”，与原文不符。Something to hope for指“有事情去期待”的意思，与原文中“有美丽的梦”仍不吻合。 改译： Do what you want, love who deserves your love and dream beautiful dreams. I hope that there is something I will fight for, someone worthy of my love and something beautiful to dream of. I want something to do, someone deserves my love and something to hope for.?? I want to do something, love someone, hope for sth. ?? 5. 希望也许是最好的东西，而美好的东西永远不会消亡。 Hope is a good thing, maybe the best of things. And no good thing ever dies. 6. 冬天不忧虑夏天的迟来。夏天不担心冬天的将至。 Winter comes and waits peacefully for summer. Summer comes and is not drilled for winter. 语法问题：两个简单分句单独呈现无联系，显得很生硬，没有美感。 出处：此句原文出自《海上钢琴师》“为什么路上的人喜欢刨根问底虚度了许多光阴？冬天忧虑夏天的迟来，夏天担心冬天的将至。”Winter comes and you can’t wait for summer; and in summer you live in dread of winter. 所以原译有理解上的错误。冬天（我们）不忧虑夏天的迟来，夏天（我们）不担心冬天的将至，以体现学生不虚度时光，珍惜当下。