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主题写作(一)　人物故事篇话题分析人物故事类书面表达一般针对考生熟悉的著名人物或者同学、朋友来设题，要求考生对人物进行描写。主要涉及描写人物的简历、变化以及自己对此人物的看法等。此类试题通常以要点提示或者表格提示的方式来考查。常用表达1．My friend Jenny comes from New York. 2．She has a round face and often wears a pair of glasses. 3．He often helps his classmates with the homework, and also helps the people in trouble. 4．I want to be a person like Helen from now and get along well with everyone. 5．I miss so many good friends, especially my best friend—David. 6．He is a 15-year-old student, who is outgoing. 7．He is good at playing basketball. 8．I hope that he will become a famous person in the future and we can keep in touch with each other. 典型例题在初中三年的英语学习中，Daniel的善良和助人为乐等优秀品质给同学们留下了深刻的印象。请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇题为“My Friend Daniel”的短文。注意：1.词数：80词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；2. 文章必须包含表格所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。Daniel Appearance Likes Dislikes sports Personality helpful—help the old cross the road kind—work at the Helping Hands Club creative—create a TV program … What can you learn from him？My Friend Daniel My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He _______________________________________________________________________________________【审题思路】1．找出关键点：外貌、爱好、性格特征；2．列出提纲。从以上三个方面简单列出提纲；3．明确时态：主要使用一般现在时；4．确定人称：第三人称。【写作模板】【佳作赏析】My Friend Daniel My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He has a round face and often wears a pair of glasses (结合要点：描写图片中人物的长相). He is good at playingcomputer games (结合要点：写擅长玩电脑游戏), but(转折词的使用，使行文跌宕起伏) he dislikes sports. He has many good personalities. He is helpful (结合要点：写乐于助人). He often(频度副词的使用，使文章流畅自然) helps his classmates with the homework, and also(副词的使用，使文章过渡自然) helps the old cross the road. He is kind to others (结合要点：写对人友善). He works at the Helping Hands Club. He is willing to help the people in need. He is also creative (结合要点：写有创造性). For example(举例说明，使文章生动), he can create a TV program. He is generous to his friends (结合要点：适当展开). He likes to share his things with them. So (so一词引出作者学到的内容) I want to be a person like Daniel from now and get al