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南通市通州区教研室沈晓彦老师提供 苏州市2015届高三零模作文 As is shown in the caricature, two men are painting on the canvas.________ Standards of grading Grade 5: (21-25) Grade 4: (16-20) Grade 3: (11-15) Grade 2: (6-10) Grade 1: (1-5) Outer appearance handwriting paragraphs Basic elements of a good composition Inner qualities Sentence patterns WordsPhrases Conjunction Step 1: Describe the cartoon Step 2: Interpret its implied meaning Step 3: Voice your opinions about the phenomenon Writing process What’s in the cartoon? Observe it carefully and find some key information: ----People ; things; words ;actions; feelings ... Useful sentence structures: As is vividly shown/ portrayed/depicted/ illustrated /indicated in the picture, ..... As can be seen in the picture, ...... Step 1 :Describe the cartoon A boy is occupied in chatting on the Internet. He refuses to talk with his mother. The mother can do nothing but stand behind the boy. She is depressed. Make at least four simple sentences. As is vividly portrayed in the picture, occupied in chatting on the Internet, a boy refuses to talk with his mother. The mother can do nothing but stand behind the boy, depressed. Combine the sentences. What’s behind the cartoon? Think twice. A picture is worth a thousand words. Reveal related factors. Step 2 : Interpret its implied meaning Some useful sentence structures: The picture shows/ indicates/implies /describes that… What it describes vividly is a kind of common phenomenon among people who … The caricature vividly reflects a social phenomenon that… Find out some solutions. Some useful sentence structures: As far as I’m concerned, some effective measures should be taken. On my personal note,… From my perspective,… For my part,… Only when people work together can we ensure… Only in this way can…. Only with joint efforts may we believe that the better market we are looking forward to i