怎样给作文润色2014.pptVIP

《高考英语科考试说明》中第五档（21~25分）的给分范围和要求 覆盖所有内容要点； 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇； 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言应用能力； 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，完全达到了预期的写作目的。 全、准、顺 、雅 怎样给作文润色 合理的想象和发挥 选词特色 句式的多样 关联词的使用 复杂多样的句式 复合句 倒装句 强调结构 非谓语 感叹句 虚拟语气 独立主格结构、反意问句、并列句、名言、警句等 关联词的使用 （1）表时间的. （2）表顺序及过程的：first(ly), first of all, second(ly), at first, then, next, at last, finally, etc. （3）表转折的：but, yet, and yet, instead, however, although, though, otherwise, or else, in spite of, etc. （4）表结果的：thus, therefore, so, as a result, seeing that, luckily, (un)fortunately, etc. （5）表强调的：first of all, above all. indeed, surely, certainly, of course, after all, at least, at most, etc. 6) 表递进的：besides, what’s more, in addition, even, once more, what was worse, to make things worse, etc. （7）表解释或说明的：in other words, that is, that is to say, namely, for example, actually, and so on, such as, personally, believe it or not, to tell you the truth, according to this, for this reason, etc. （8）表比较的：just like, just as, in the same way, more or less, on the contrary, on one hand, on the other hand, while, etc. （9）表总结的：finally, in conclusion, in a word, in general, generally speaking, in short, as you / we know, in the end, in all, etc. * 1. 多实少虚 : A nice person 2. 短语优先： I cannot bear it. We want peace. generous, humorous, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospitable, considerate,promising I cannot put up with it. We are looking forward to peace. ３弃旧取新: There are many trees in the street. There is a clean river in the city 1. 较高级词汇 Many trees line the street. A clean river winds through the city. 丰富的语法结构(Exercises 1) 1. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）. 2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） 3. He came in and there was a baby in his arms. (用with结构) , please give me an e-mail. is that the little girl knows so many things. On his arriving What surprises him He came in , with a baby