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2011年11月GMAT作文机经AI(11.18)35. 2次 　　原题：No. 40 “With the increasing emphasis on a global economy and international cooperation, people need to understand that their role as citizens of the world is more important than their role as citizens of a particular country.” 　　思路： 　　l 两者并不是完全对立的环保 　　l 事实上两者可以相互促进一个人在一个国家做慈善工作很可能也会有一天为别的国家的人服务 　　l 当两者冲突的时候哪个更重要取决与不同的情况。 　　ü 有时, 很多问题是全球性的,需要世界公民的角度考虑,而非只站在一国角度. 比如,环境问题, 能源问题, 等等. 人们应该为整个地球负责任,而不仅仅是为了一个民族或国家. 因为, 如果是后者, 则很有可能只解决自己的问题, 而把危害转移到别的国家. shift the burden and threats from one nation to another…比如: 出口垃圾,比如大量进口发展中国家的木材.虽然自己的国家暂时解决了问题,但长远看, 没有国家孤立地存在, 不能short-sight and narrow mind, 因为interdependent. 　　ü 但这不意味着人们就要discard or weaken their role as citizens of one nation. 其实两者并不是incompatible, 更多时候, 可以作为complementary one—and can even be synergistic.比如the preservation of traditional culture, 人们作为一国公民,保护自己独特文化的同时, 实际上也为全球的diversity of culture作出了positive effort. 比如, 为一个国家的public service付出努力的同时, 很可能激发起公民的社会责任感和compassion and responsibility, 参与到国际public service 中, 比如很多charitarian就开始从对本国的慈善事业subsidize the school in one nation也激发起对attention to the education in the international scope. 　　View1: people’s role as citizens of the world is become more and more important in the modern society. 　　View2: Without the awareness of being citizens of a particular country, people will find no roots to behave on the stage of the world. 　　View3: these two roles, national and international, are not mutually exclusive alternatives. They can be properly combined. 　　Optional words: 　　代替取代supersede compatible be compatible with... citizenship domain This one person would be acting consistently as a citizen of community, state, nation and world. Admittedly, conflicting/clashing/discordant obligations sometimes arise as a result of our new dual citizenship. obligatory In sum, although our dual citizenship may at times lead to conflict, one role need not automatically take precedence over the other. more often than not The relationship between the