9复习冲刺研讨会观摩课课件--书面表达.ppt

①When they are chatting, they don’t care their writing. When chatting, they don’t care their writing. ②Every day, they have much homework. They can’t remember the characters. Every day, they have so much homework to do that they fail to remember the characters. 南通市英语作文评分细则 一、有以下情况之一的，在正常评分以后再扣9分。 1. 全文没有使用任何比较复杂的语言结构，例如从句、倒装句等。 2. 全文没有使用任何比较高级的表达方式的。 3. 全文没有使用任何关联词语的。 二、有以下情况之一的，在正常评分以后再扣5分。 1、书写潦草，不规范，影响理解的。 2、卷面不洁，乱涂改的。 3、因审题不清而全文人称使用错误的。 4、动词、时态、人称错误达3处以上的。 5、句子结构严重错误达3处以上的。 三、有以下情况之一的，在正常评分以后再扣2分。 1、全文不分段。 2、词数少于130. 3、词数多于170. 五、有以下情况之一的，扣5分. 1、每遗漏一个主要点的。 六、有以下情况的，不扣分。 1、为使用比较高级的表达方式而出现的些许错误。 2、紧扣主题作适当发挥时出现的些许错误。 七、有以下情况的，不以评分，以0分计。 1、没有使用0.5毫米的黑色签字笔。 2、答题中有学校、班级或个人真实信息的。 ③It will make people pay attention to our mother tongue. (raise the awareness of) It will raise the awareness of our mother tongue. It will help students learn Chinese well. (have a positive effect on) It will have a positive effect on students’ Chinese learning. It will raise the awareness of our mother tongue. It will have a positive effect on students’ Chinese learning. ______ the awareness of our mother tongue, it will have a positive effect on Chinese learning. (non-verbal非谓语） (not only…but also) It will not only raise the awareness of our mother tongue, but also have a positive effect on students’ Chinese learning. Raising …________. ________, when young people chat online, they attach little importance to their writing. __________, with so much homework to do, they have trouble memorizing the characters. The new policy is intended to deal with the situation. Raising the social awareness of our mother tongue, it will have a positive effect on Chinese learning. __________, it’s high time that we took action. __________, we should refer to a dictionary for unknown characters. Second, collect the mistakes and review them frequently. In a word, only by working hard can we achieve our goal. There are several reasons behind.