electricity 写作指导.docx

Electricity 写作思路：I 基本提纲1.电在我们的生活中用途广泛。（列举2-3个用途）2.没有电，生活会变的不方便，不舒适。3.因此要节约用电，简单谈谈如何节约用电。4.首尾。合理，明智的利用电。PS : 2 ,3 段也可以和成一段，但需注意连贯性。（即用好过渡词、句）Electricity 写作思路：(I)1.电在我们的生活中用途广泛。（列举2-3个用途） We use electricity to do….at home ( at school , at work ) We use electricity for doing ….at home ( at school , at work ) Electricity is used for doing … at home ( at school , at work ) Electricity is used to do … at home ( at school , at work )… make our lives more …. , … help us work more efficiently 2.没有电，生活会变的不方便，不舒适。 Without electricity , life would be less comfortable….we would not be able to do …. 3.因此要节约用电，简单谈谈如何节约用电。 We can save electricity by doing sth . If we leave home ,we should do …. 4.收尾。合理，明智的利用电。We should make full use of electricity in a wise/ proper way .写作思路：基本提纲II1. 电非常有用，是我们的好帮手/好仆人。（a good servant )（列举2-3个用途）2.电也很危险，是一个危险的仆人。（a dangerous servant )因此要安全用电，简单谈谈如何安全用电。3. 收尾。合理，安全的利用电。Electricity 写作思路：(II)1. 电非常有用，是我们的好帮手/好仆人。（a good servant )（列举2-3个用途） We use electricity to do….at home ( at school , at work ) We use electricity for doing ….at home ( at school , at work ) Electricity is used for doing … at home ( at school , at work ) Electricity is used to do … at home ( at school , at work ) … make our lives more …. , … help us work more efficiently 2.电也很危险，是一个危险的仆人。（a dangerous servant )因此要安全用电，简单谈谈如何安全用电。 It’s a dangerous servant . We should be always careful with it . Don’t do … when …..; Do .. when We are not allowed to do when …. We mustn’t /must do 3. 收尾。合理，安全的利用电。We should electricity in a proper/ right way .Common errors :1.If there is no electricity ,life becomes not colorful .2.Electricity can let air –conditioner open .3.If we touch electrical appliances with wet hands ,we will be die .4.Every electrical appliances are need electricity .5.And touch any switches when our hands are wet is not allowed 6.Without electricity , we would can’t watch tv too .7.Washing machines can wash c