(湘潭市督导课)双语报第7期作文讲评.pptVIP

高三周考试卷作文讲评;1; 作文题 假如你是李华，你的好友李明想找一个英国笔友，托你写信向你的英国朋友Tom求助，请根据以下要点给Tom 写邮件。 1. 说明写邮件的原因； 2. 简要介绍李明； 3.指出李明对笔友的要求。;;;1. He is of medium height with black straight hair and a handsome face . He is not only outstanding but also always thinks of others. In my heart, he is an ideal person. 2. Li Ming is a real-life Samaritan and a real master in England Middle age and literature. He is willing to cope with troubles of his friends and is always there for us . As for capabilities, he could read Shakespeare and Jane Austen in English without a dictionary. He is fond of legacies(遗产) (legend传说) and classics in his spare time.; 简要介绍李明; My friend Li Ming is outgoing and is gifted for communicating. And he has a lots of hobbies such as climbing , skating, swimming and so on. What is the most important is that he has been to England. Thus, he falls in love with its attractive history. He also made some requirements for the penfriend. ; 简要介绍李明;Main Problems;How to enrich the content?;Select the topic words 精选词汇;; ;;;;Relevant (切题的) Reasonable (合理的) Familiar (熟悉的) Positive (积极的); 美段欣赏; Li Ming wants to have a pen pal who has similar hobbies with him. He is good at English and arts. In his spare time, he often reads some great works. His favorite author is Shakespeare. Also, he loves playing tennis. Besides, Li Ming wants his pen friend to be knowledgeable to answer his questions about the UK. It will be better if the pen pal lives near Oxford. (1401李适然); Dear Tom, How are you? I am writing to ask you to do me a favour. My friend Li Ming wants to have a pen friend from your country and I appreciate it if you can help him. (写作目的+写作背景） Li Ming is very friendly and considerate. He is always ready to help others. Besides, he has a wide range of hobbies, such as playing football, singing, and playing the guitar. He wants to have a pen friend who has a good character