大学英语4级写作改2.pptVIP

外语部　符祝芹;　　　内容提要 考题趋势 评分标准 备考指南 考场策略;一．四级写作考题趋势;一．四级写作考题趋势; 二. 四级写作评分标准 切题：正确表达思想,思路清晰; 　　 连贯性：意义连贯，前后一致;　 　　 语言：无重大语法错误。 ;１．切题;My view on off-campus room renting1.很多大学生在校外租房居住２.学生校外租房的主要原因３.校外租房的利弊;　　 As we all know, with the development of society and economics, the campuses become more close to society. Under the condition, college schools are full of various clubs.; 学生作文分析例３： May I have your attention , please. I’m here to introduce our club to you. The name of our club is Japanese club. If you join our club, you can have the opportunity to attend many interesting activities. In the first place, there are some classes in which you can learn Japanese. Also sometimes we will call on and watch some Japanese movie together. The best of all, many people who know Japanese culture well will talk with us and tell us some funny Japanese story.;;My view on off-campus room renting;1)表示开始： first of all, in the first place, at the very beginning, to begin with, currently, at present, for one thing等。 2)表示承接： besides, further more, in addition, moreover, what’s more, meanwhile, apart from, as well as, similarly, in the same way等。;3)表示转折：however, whereas, while, on the contrary, in contrast, on the other hand等。 4)表示结论：in conclusion, in brief, in short, to sum up, ultimately, as a result, as a consequence, overall等。 5)表示原因：because (of ), accordingly, due to, owing to, for this reason, since 等。 ;表达观点：in my opinion, personally, from my viewpoint, it seems to me, it is clear to me that, as far as I am concerned 举例说明：for example, for instance, as follows, such as, that is to say, namely, just as, in particular等。 表示让步：although, in spite of, despite of, despite the fact that, regardless of等。;３.语言;常见语言错误：;三．备考指南;词汇;词汇;　　　　　　　gain/obtain/access to/derive 　　　　　　　knowledge from ; ;;３.写作词汇高分运用;３.写作词汇高分运用; 　多使用正式词汇或短语，代替非???式或随意的词汇或表达，例如： good：positive, favorable, promising, perfect, plea