2014届江门1模作文讲评.pptVIP

Basic writing;1. Translate the key words and expressions: 1. 临近 2. 面临 3. 关注 4. 远离 5. 电子厂 6. 团聚 7. 交通拥挤 8. 取决于 9. 把……考虑进去 ;模板2：①引出调查、采访内容 → ②一些人的观点及理由 → ③另一些人的观点及理由 → ④你的观点及理由 _________ made a survey on _______________ among ____________. （或________ interviewed ____________ on _____________）(引出调查、采访内容). ;___________ of them think ______________, because they feel like doing _____________ while ______________would like to … ,because they believe that________________ .Besides ,_____hold the belief that______ to _________the rest of _____ tend to __________. From my point of view/ As for me, _______________ because ________________ (你的观点及理由).;百分数的表达方法。;注意时态： 涉及到“上周三”具体的时间状语，句子要用____________，而调查的结果表示观点看法，必须用___________。 ; 用上各种句型和语法结构,如同位 语，定语从句，分词短语，连接词等。 ; 范文欣赏 ; When Spring Festival is coming, going back home for the Spring Festival always becomes the main issue that the migrant workers are most concerned about. Last Wednesday, a survey concerning whether they would go back home to enjoy / spend the Spring Festival was conducted among over 100 migrant workers in a big electronic factory far away from the city center. According to the survey, about 70% of them choose to go back home for the reason that not only is the Spring Festival an important time for their family reunion but also they can feel the warmth from their family. However, about 20% of them choose to stay instead of going back home for the reasons that it is too difficult to buy tickets, and the traffic is crowded. Besides, the rest don’t make any decision, considering the duration of the holiday and the weather.; When the Spring Festival is approaching, going back home for the festival always becomes an important problem migrant workers are concerned about. Last Wednesday we carried out a survey among over one hundred migrant workers in a big electronic factory far away from the city center about whether to go home to celebrate the Spring Festival. According to th