26.现象剖析[英语写作].ppt

26.现象分析;文体概述 现象分析的文章属于说明文，一般先指出某地存在某种现象，然后说明这种现象产生的原因，最后提出建议或呼吁杜绝这种现象。通常用一般现在时态。;常用语块 引起某人的注意 ______________________ ________________________________________ 2. 采取措施(做……) ______________________ 3. 日益严重的问题 ______________________ 4. 普遍现象 ______________________ 5. 改善这种情况 ______________________;6. 全社会 _______________________ 7. 安全意识 _______________________ 8. 有效的办法/途径 _______________________ 9. 越来越多的…… _______________________ 10. 共同关注 _______________________;11. 热点话题 _____________________ 12. 人们普遍认为 _____________________ 13. 社会发展的必然结果 ____________________________ 14. 随着经济的快速发展 ____________________________ 15. 面临新的机遇和挑战 ____________________________;套用句式 随着工业的发展，城市的空气质量变得越来越差。 2. 近期校车安全问题成为了一个日益严重的问题。 ;3. 如今高中生在网上开通博客成为了一种普遍现象。 4. 结果，这种现象引起了社会的关注。 5. 有三方面的主要因素应该引起我们的关注。 ;习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文) Recently the safety of school buses has become a seriously problem, that has attracted more and more public attention. So in our class we have held an heated discussion on the causes and solution. After the discuss, we find that the problem caused by three kinds of reasons which include overloading, speeding as well as weak safety awareness.; As by the solutions, first of all, we all think that it necessary to examine the safety of the school buses. Beside, we should stop risky buses from being operated. Only if all people attach importance to safety education to raise safety awareness can traffic accidents decreased.;1. seriously →serious修饰名词要用形容词形式。 2. that →which非限制性定语从句不能用that引导?? 3. an →a冠词后面的heated并非以元音音素开头。 4. solution →solutions solution是可数名词，要和causes保持一致。 5. discuss →discussion定冠词the后面接名词。;6. 在problem后加is分析句子成分可知，此处caused作谓语，故要考虑时态和语态。时态准确，但语态应该用被动才符合逻辑。 7. by →for固定搭