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写作技巧点拨系列(十) 发挥合理想象, 灵活阐释开放作文;【典例导练】 (2013·北京高考)请根据下面提示, 写一篇短文。词数不少于50。 You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so. ; 【写作指导】 1. 开放作文的特点。 (1)自由发挥的空间大。 开放作文属于非控制性写作或非任务型写作, 即主要根据文字提示、图画展示或表格列举等形式设题, 留有一定的空间让考生自由发挥。; (2)能力要求较高。它不仅考查考生的语言表达能力、组织能力, 而且还考查考生的逻辑思维能力、发散思维能力、想象能力以及多角度考虑问题的能力。因此这种题型的作文虽然给考生提供了发挥的机会, 但由于考生对给出的信息没有真正领会, 没有理清文章的命题意图导致失分现象严重。; 2. 与其他文体的区别。 开放式作文不等同于一般的提纲作文, 因为它不像提纲作文那样所给的要点很全面, 写作时按照一定的“框框”进行发挥即可, 它要求考生凭借试卷上所提供的线索(包括文字提示和图画), 利用发散性思维, 去合理地想象、推理, 然后写出一篇合情合理的文章。;【审题谋篇】信息全而不漏;【佳句锤炼】词句精而高级 1. 我想图画告诉我们的是: 一个人的梦想和现实通常是有差别 的。 (一般表达)I think, the picture is telling us a truth. There is usually a difference between one’s dream and reality. (宾语从句)I think that __________________________. There is usually a difference between one’s dream and reality. (同位语从句)I think the picture is ___________________there is usually a difference between one’s dream and reality. ;2. 然而, 对人们来说每次实现他们的梦想是十分不容易的。 (一般表达)But people realize their dreams every time is very difficult. (形式主语+不定式复合结构)________, __ is not so easy ___ ______________ their dreams every time. ;3. 就像图画中的那个人, 他实际上钓到的是条小鱼, 而不是他 希望的大鱼。 (一般表达)Like the man in the picture, he actually catches a small fish, and he doesn’t catch a big one that he wishes for. (定语从句+高级词汇)___________________________, _______ ____________________________, he actually catches a small one. ;4. 以我之见, 人们需要学会去接受现实并且继续尝试。 (一般表达)According to my idea, people need to learn to accept the reality. They should keep on trying. (介词短语+并列谓语)_____________, people need to _______ accept the reality and _____________. 5. 有了再次尝试他们或许会获得他们梦想的东西。 (一般表达)They try again and maybe they get the things they dream of. (介词短语)_______________, they may gain what they dream of. ;【连句成篇】过渡巧而自然 I think the picture is telling us a truth that there is usually a difference between one’s dr