（浙江专供）版高中英语 写作点拨系列（四）段落写作之段落的展开课件 新人教版.pptVIP

写作点拨系列（四） 段落写作之段落的展开;【核心点拨】 段落的发展技巧较常用的有以下几种：按时间顺序展开、按空间顺序展开、按过程展开、举例等。 1. 按时间顺序展开 在叙述一个故事或者一系列事件时, 通常按事件发生的先后顺序排列句子。在说明文中叙述做一件事应该遵循的程序或步骤时, 也常用时间顺序法。; 常用衔接词和短语 首环节：first, at first, first of all, in the first place, to begin with等。 中间环节：second, secondly, in the second place, next, afterwards, after that, then, later, another, third, thirdly, still another, in addition, besides, furthermore等。 末环节： lastly, at last, finally, eventually, in the end 等。; 2. 按空间顺序展开 空间顺序指按物体的空间位置(自左至右, 由近到远, 由上至下, 由下到上, 由里到外, 由外到里, 由中间到两边等顺序)来展开段落。 常用的衔接词和短语 be situated/located in/on/at, be surrounded by, next to, to the east/south/west/north of, close to, from. . . to. . . , above, over, under, below, between, across, opposite等。; 3. 按过程展开 描述涉及多个步骤, 应该按照过程的发展顺序把这些步骤交代清楚, 在这一类文章里常常用祈使句和不定代词“你”来表达。 描述过程的常用衔接词和短语 (1)Firstly. . . Secondly. . . Thirdly. . . Finally. . . (2)First, Then, Next, After this, Lastly. . . (3)Afterwards, Furthermore, Moreover, In addition to. . . ; 4. 举例 举例法是一种常见的展开段落的方法, 它用典型、具体而生动的事例来证明、阐述一个观点, 支持主题句, 使段落主题句具体化, 使文章通俗易懂。但是, 段落中必须精选例子, 要做到恰如其分、准确地说明问题。 ; 举例法常用的衔接词 (1)介词短语：for example, for instance, by way of examples等。 (2)形容词短语：such as, such. . . as. . . 等。 (3)副词：as等。 (4)动词短语：take an example, take. . . for example, draw an example等。;【对点训练】 下面有五篇短文, 在段落的展开方面各有侧重, 请补全句子并标明属于哪类情况的展开技巧。 1. I was far too happy that we made an appointment to visit Beijing together ____________(下周末). How I appreciate the opportunity to be your guide in Beijing! But I’m afraid we’ll have to make it ___________(下次), because I’ll be meeting my uncle at the airport. He is on business from Australia, and;will be home _______________(仅有两天). It’s a rare chance for our family to get reunited since he left home ten years ago. I hope you’ll forgive me for not keeping my word. If it’s convenient for you, w