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期中考试情景作文讲评2011年11月6日;情景作文（2011届期中考试）;;审题;图片要点;写作中出现的问题 1、审题： 1）审文字： 你目前的学习和生活情况---一般现在时 毕业后的打算---一般讲来时 2）审图：P3：妈妈给你而非你给妈妈送水 2、时态：一般现在时+一般讲来时 3、人称：我/我们; 4、文体：邮件---注重交际性 -As you know, I’m preparing for … -You can imagine how busy and tried we are… -Looking forward to your reply. 5、表达要准确或达意： 如：进步奖： -Prize for Progress -Progress Award -Most Improved -Best Improved Award -Outstanding Improvement Award 6、黑色签字笔：2人（年级）扣5分；高考为无效卷 ; Sample： Dear Tom, I’m very glad to receive your e-mail in which you asked me about my life. As a Senior 3 student, I am now working very hard to prepare for the National College Entrance Examination. In class, I listen to the teachers attentively and take notes carefully. After class, I take an active part in various sports to keep healthy, which, I believe, is very important for my study. Both my teachers and parents give me a lot of support. With their help and encouragement, I have made great progress and been able to build up my confidence. I have decided to attend a medical university and become a doctor in the future. I am sure I can achieve this goal. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua;写作技巧 ;写作技巧 ;写作技巧 ;写作技巧 ;写作技巧 ;文1班李梦蝶 …Since I entered senior 3, life has been busier than ever before, but at the same time, I feel happier and more fulfilled. As I am embracing the crucial point in my life—the National College Entrance Examination, I have to do tons of exercises everyday. I do math practices a lot, because it is my favorite subject. After school, I usually spare some time to play football and do jogging. Doing sports makes me energetic all day long. Life has been pretty satisfying these days. My mother is very supportive and creates a very comfortable atmosphere for my study. My teachers are always encouraging me when I make some progress. And when I have time, I like to make some plans for the future. I intend to go to the Medical School and become a doctor after I gra