书面表达专项突破_日记.ppt

1.日记;文体概述 英语日记一般记录一天发生的事件或是自己感受最深的事，可分为记事、议论、描写、抒情等。写英语日记要注意下面几点： 　　一、格式 英语日记由书端和正文组成。书端指写日记的星期、日期和天气，顶格写在左上角，先写星期，再写日期，最后写天气。(例如：Friday February 26th, 2016 Sunny) 　　二、时态 　　谓语动词多用一般过去时态，但是要根据具体情况使用其他时态。;三、写正文时应注意的问题 1. 围绕一个主题来展开。 2. 若无法用已学语言知识来表达某种意思，可采用“同义转换法”。 3. 结尾最好用一句话来总结自己的感想或体会。;常用语块 因为 ___________________ 2. 对……感到惊讶 ___________________ 3. 对……严格要求 ___________________ 4. 为……做好准备 ___________________ 5. 到达 ___________________;6. 给……一些忠告/建议 ___________________ 7. 帮助某人做某事___________________ 8. 出发；动身 ___________________ 9. 发生 ___________________ 10. 积极参加…… ___________________;11. 散步/休息 ___________________ 12. 采取有效措施做某事 ___________________ 13. 乘坐公交车/火车/自行车 ___________________ 14. 拍照 ___________________ 15. 在家/在上班 ___________________;套用句式 今天我在广州经历了一件难忘的事。 2. 昨晚我和一些好朋友去KTV唱歌。 3. 这是我第一次做……;4. 在公园散步的时候，我遇到一个外国人正在欣赏城市的美景。 5. 首先，……其次，……此外，……最后，……;习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文) Wednesday July 20, 2015 Fine Yesterday I went to Qingdao with my family by the train. The sunshine and fresh air there made us comfortably. We went to the seaside, where the sea was as blue as the sky. Bathing in the sunshine on the beach were really an enjoyable thing. I picked up a lot of colorful shells with my little sister.; There we buy many interesting souvenirs. I was planning to send them my friends. We ate many thing there, such as fish, prawn(大虾), beef and so on. They were very delicious. At night they lived in a hotel nearby where was clean and tidy but the price was reasonable. Qingdao is such a beautiful and interesting place that it is well worth see a second time.;1. 去掉train前的the因为乘坐交通工具不用定冠词the。 2. comfortably →comfortable作宾补用形容词。 3. were →was动名词作主语谓语动词用单数。 4. buy →bought这是一篇日记，讲述过去发生的事情用一般过去时。 5. 在my friends前加to表示“把某