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写作技巧点拨系列(五) 精研提纲材料, 轻松驾驭提纲作文;【典例导练】 （2014·唐山模拟）作为一名高三学生的你，明年即将毕业。现在校报征稿，请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的体会和建议。 1. 对老师与家长的关爱表示感谢； 2. 向与自己发生过矛盾的同学表达歉意； 3. 努力学习，实现人生梦想； 4. 对学弟、学妹的建议。;【写作指导】 Ⅰ. 常用句式 (1)as. . . (2)It won’t be long before. . . (3)without. . . (4)Firstly. . . Secondly. . . Finally. . . ;Ⅱ. 黄金模板 第一段：简述写这篇文章的用意 High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one’s life（人生值得纪念）. As a Senior 3 student, it won’t be long before I graduate（即将毕业）. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students. ; 第二段：梳理提纲要点，表达谢意、歉意和感悟 Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation of help from those standing by me all the way_____. . . Secondly, it’s high time to say sorry to classmates _____. . . Above all, . . . Just as the old saying goes, “No pains, no gains. ”_____ 第三段：对他人的希望 Finally I hope _____……;【审题谋篇】;【佳句锤炼】 1. 作为一名高三学生，不久就毕业了，现在我有很多事情与 同学们分享。 （一般表达）I’m a student in Senior 3 and I’ll graduate soon. Now, I have a lot of things and I’ll share with my fellow students. （介词短语+固定句式+不定式作定语）___ a Senior 3 student, ____________________ I graduate. Now, I have much _______ ____ my fellow students. ;2. 首先，我想向那些一直支持我，给我帮助和关爱的老师、 父母、朋友表示感谢。如果没有他们的帮助和建议，我的生 活就会与现在不一样。 （一般表达）At the beginning, I would like to show my appreciation of help from those who are standing by me all the way, teachers, parents, including friends. If there were no their help and advice, my life would be different. （过渡语+分词作定语+虚拟语气）______, I would like to show my appreciation of help from _____________ by me all the way, teachers, parents, and ______________. ________ __________________, my life would be different. ;3. 其次，到了向我伤害或误解过的同学道歉的时间了。交流 和微笑充当友谊的桥梁。 （一般表达）Then, it’s high time that I should say sorry to my classmates. I hurt or misunderstood them. Communication and smiles are used as bridges to friendship. （过渡语+固定句式+定语从句）________, ______________ say sorry to my classmates ______ I hurt or misu