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书面表达临场提分宝典 第三讲 通过高考看作文高分点;学习内容;2013年广东卷——书面表达： 　To many people even the word “work” sounds unpleasant, not necessarily because they are lazy. The same man, who dislikes his job in the factory or even in the office, may work hard at the weekend, painting the house or digging the garden. What is the reason, then? In most cases, it is because these people simply do not enjoy the job they;110个词;110个词;;;They also suffer from less respect and lower pay, working all day on the street no matter how bad the weather is.（22个词）;　　（1）表示顺序/对照：first—second—third, firstly—secondly—thirdly, first of all—then/next—after that—finally, on one hand—on the other hand 　　（2）表示转折：on the contrary 　;On the other hand, they also suffer from less respect and lower pay, working all day on the street no matter how bad the weather is.;高分点二——衔接/层次——三种衔接（内容、词汇、句子）;（3） 表示总结：;高分点二——衔接/层次——三种衔接（内容、词汇、句子）;高分点二——衔接/层次——三种衔接（内容、词汇、句子）;高分点二——衔接/层次——三种衔接（内容、词汇、句子）;句子衔接;2013年全国高考新课标卷I书面表达： 　　假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明： 李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30 　;要点一：告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会;高分点三——结构——交叉并用法 （长句短句、单词短语、同义变换、语法结构、主动被动、倒装陈述）;单词短语： 要点一：告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会;单词短语：;高分点三——结构——交叉并用法 （长句短句、单词短语、同义变换、语法结构、主动被动、倒装陈述）;高分点三——结构——交叉并用法 （长句短句、单词短语、同义变换、语法结构、主动被动、倒装陈述）;高分点三——结构——交叉并用法 （长句短句、单词短语、同义变换、语法结构、主动被动、倒装陈述）;高分点三——结构——交叉并用法 （长句短句、单词短语、同义变??、语法结构、主动被动、倒装陈述）;高分点三——结构——交叉并用法 （长句短句、单词短语、同义变换、语法结构、主动被动、倒装陈述）;高分点三——结构——交叉并用法 （长句短句、单词短语、同义变换、语法结构、主动被动、倒装陈述）;第一段：Today, the majority of people don’t like their jobs because they consider they are small and useless. On the contrary, they are wrong. 第二段：We know cleaners. Judging from two facts, they are doing the hardest work. On one hand, they get up early in the morning every day and clean the streets. Although the weather is bad, they have to get up. On the other hand, they also suffer from less respect and lower pay, working all day in the streets no matter how bad the weather is. Although cleaning streets is no mo