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高考作文训练:看图作文写作技巧;作文中常用的语法结构： 从句类：定语从句; 状语从句; 名词性从句 非谓语：不定式、分词做后置定语、状语；动名词相关句型 强调倒装：否定副词置于句首； Only+状语置于句首；频率副词置于句首；让步状语置于句首；各种强调倒装句型 形容词副词：the more… the more 句型; no adj. than; more…than…;各种词组 虚拟语气：I wish…; I would rather…; It’s time…; It’s necessary(important…)that…should… ;作文修改范例详解 假设下面六幅图画描述的是你在5月3日(星期五)的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面所示内容，用英语写一篇120字左右的日记。;在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来. On the way, I found/saw a case fall down from/off a man’s bike.;我捡起箱子,并想骑车人大声喊叫,但他却已经骑远了. I picked up the case and shouted at the man, but he had already rode away.;于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主. I stopped a taxi to catch up with the man.;我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他. I caught up with him at last and gave the case back to him. 失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了. The man took out some money to thank me, but I refused.;我又乘车返回了电影院,司机被我的行动所感动,不收我的车费. I went back to the cinema by taxi. The driver was very moved and didn’t accept my money.;Sample: May 3rd,Friday Fine This afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw a case fall off a mans bike. I picked up the case and shouted at the man to stop. But he didnt hear me and rode away. What should I do? Then I had an idea. I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case. And we caught up with the man. I gave the case back to him. The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused . Then the driver took me to the cinema. When I paid him, the driver wouldn’t accept the money .He said he was very moved at what I did. ;How to revise it? Original version: I went to see a film this afternoon. On the way to the cinema, I saw a case fall off a man’s bike. Revised version: I was on my way to the cinema this afternoon when I happened to see a case fall off a man’s bike.;Original version: I picked up the case. I shouted at the man loudly. But he didn’t hear me and rode away. Revised version: ①After picking up the case, I shouted at the man loudly, but he rode too fast to hear me.