初三英语写作交流 最终版--理工附中.ppt

*北京理工大学附中* 交流内容;一、《课标》及《考试说明》要求下的书面表达;;;评分标准;二. 近期中考模考话题汇总;二. 近期中考模考话题汇总;;;;;把从社会大课堂所学考出来。;;中考作文层次和梯度;中考作文层次和梯度;书面表达面临的问题 书面表达一向是很多同学心中“永远的痛”。 1.有时候看到一个题目都不知道从哪下手； 2.有时候明明看着眼熟，却又想不起来该怎么 用文字表达； 3.有时候觉得自己写的不错，可是得分却不理 想。;;1、按话题训练：;话题训练操作实例(每周训练一个话题)　;;;Emily;Step 1: 审题：人称、时态（语态）、要点。 Step 2: 确定结构： 围绕问题分段论述，搭起框架结构 主次分明（鸡头--猪肚– 豹尾），适当增加细节。 文章框架结构 Heading 点题，亮观点 Body 层次分明 Ending 小结，呼应主题。;Step 3：列提纲、细化要点： Heading 琳达是改变了我的人。 Linda is the person who has changed me. 2. Body（关键信息点） 我不喜欢跑步。I did not like running. 琳达告诉我别担心。Linda told me not to worry. 当我要放弃时，我听到有认为我加油，我发现正是她。when I wanted to give up, I heard someone cheering on me and found that it was Linda. 我坚持跑到终点。I kept running to the finishing line. 3. Ending 我每天坚持跑步，是她使我有能力挑战我自己。 I practiced running every day . She makes me believe that I have the ability to challenge myself.;Step 4：将要点连句成文，增加细节 ;Step 5：完善文章（选词酌句, 提升亮点，升华主题） ;在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活使用长短句和复合句，使文章增色，注意使用万能句，替换句。 例1： In the depth of my memory, there are lots of people who influenced me a lot and I really appreciate them. However, there is no doubt that Linda is the person who has changed me. 例2: As far as I’m concerned, I learn that nothing is impossible if we put our hearts in it .From then on , I practiced running every day after school. Moreover, it’s Linda who let me know believing in ourselves plays an important role in our daily life, and with these, we can not only get stronger but also succeed. ;四.举例说明写作语句训练的侧重点;简单句（达标） 并列句复合句（争优） 长难句模仿 扩句训练 连句成篇 ;善用简单句：;简单句的高级形式（+定语， +状语）;善用并列句;并列 *Enjoy it, and you’ll live a happy life. 2. 转折 *Some agree with it while others don’t. 3. 因果 * I love reading, for I can learn a lot without experiencing hard. ;主从复合句;（状语从句） I like / love / enjoy doing housework because it will make my parents relaxed at home. She helps me to work out the answers yourself no matter how difficult they were （宾语从句）