八年级英语写作(教学课件).ppt

安子岭总校 上课老师：袁亮 ;作文写作的字、词、句、段、篇;绝对好用的替换词;;举例;经典句型：;;6、It +谓语+时间段 +before +主语 +谓语(before引导的是时间状语从句） 7、When/ So long as/ As long as/ Once +从句，+主句（从句也可放在主句之后）;;句式多变化;[原文] We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning. [修正] Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.;;(2) 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如到装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语从句等。 ①强调句 [原文] My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely. [修正] My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely.; ② 由what等引导的从句，此处的what相当于中文中的“所… …”，有很强的概括，如： [原文] We had to stand here to catch offender. [修正] What we had to do was ( to ) stand there, trying to catch the offender.;;⑤倒装句 Only in this way can we achieve our goal. Never before have I seen such a wonderful film. ⑥ 省略句 If so, victory will be ours. You can make some changes wherever necessary.;;(3) 通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。 [原文] He stopped us an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender. [修正] He stopped us an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.;;;2012年河北省中考写作题：;我的父亲母亲;关于职业的单词;;;真题举例;;比较型作文写作;文章层次;开启段落;学会对比;如何转折;如何结尾;上海2012年的中考英语作文; My Favorite Thing;