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2010学年第一学期九年级英语期中考试作文分析;评分标准：;需注意的问题：;Using cell phones for too long does harm to our health, for they produce a lot of radiation. What’s more, we’ll probably end up having poor eyesight. Almost all cell phones are multifunctional. They can be used as an electronic dictionary, a calculator and a powerful search engine. If unfortunately there’s an emergency, we can get in touch with our parents or friends immediately so that they can get us out of trouble in time. Cell phones can hold hundreds of individual phone numbers and help to take photos. In this way, we don’t bother writing the information down on paper and it really brings lots of convenience to our daily life. ;始终用总—分—总的结构作为中考作文的基本框架：;C. 文章结尾部分必须再次陈述自己的观点，与总起句相呼应，但不宜使用与总起句一模一样的句式。;语法方面（单句改错）;I think take cell phones to school is not necessary. Because when we need to call our parents, we can go to the teachers’ office and use the telephone there. On the other hand, many students can’t control themselves. They may play the cell phone in class. Sometimes the teachers see it, but sometimes they don’t. This will stop students from paying attention on their study and will have a bad effect on their grades. As these reasons, it’s really unnecessary to take cell phones to school. ;In my opinion, it is necessary for students to bring cell phones to school to use them as tools. For the time being, many students go to school and go back home by themselves. They need a cell phone to be in touch with their parents when they have some trouble on the way. Also, if they have something that keep them from going home, they can tell their parents in time so that their parents won’t be worried. Cell phones are necessary if it’s used as a tool. ;As far as I’m concerned, taking cell phones to school is unnecessary. Students in school may put cell phones close to their bodies. Then cell phones are likely to do harm to their health. Furthermore, students don’t need to search for information, since they can ask teachers for he