三月3日周测作文讲评.pptVIP

一模作文目标 基础写作：平时成绩优秀的同学争取拿12分以上；中等以下同学至少拿及格分9分以上， 绝对不要出现空白或者只写一两行的情况。 读写任务：平时成绩优秀的同学争取拿20分以上；中等以下同学至少拿及格分15分以上，绝对不要出现空白或者只写一两行的情况。 两篇作文都要注意审题。 ;基础写作： 假如你是校报记者，请根据下面的要点，用英语写一篇短文，报道你校举办的第32届校运动会。 ［写作内容］ ;存在问题;1.上周五,周六，你校在运动场举办了校运动会。 Last Friday and Saturday, our school held a sports meeting on the playground. 报道常用被动语态: A wonderful sports meeting was held on our school playground last Friday and Saturday.;2.全校36支队，320多位选手; 15人打破上届校运会纪录 More tnan 320 athletes from 36 teams took part in the events, among whom 15 athletes broke the school records set last year.;3. 高中年级的一名运动员一人打破了三项纪录。 An athlete from Grade Three broke three records alone. It’s amazing that an athlete from Grade Three broke three records alone.;4. 广播组收到报道稿1000余篇 广播组： the broadcasting team The broadcasting team received over 1,000 reports written by students. ;5. 激发了同学们的团队合作精神，培养拼搏精神 The sports meeting highly inspired the team-work spririt of the students and developed their fighting spirit. What pleased us most is that the sports meeting highly inspired the team-work spririt of the students as well as developed their fighting spirit.; ;读写任务存在的问题;Summary;［写作内容］ 1. 以约120个词就“就读离家近还是远的大学 ”进行议论，内容包括： 1) 你喜欢在离家近还是离家远的大学读书； 2) 说明你选择这样做的理由。(详写) Topic sentences: I have some reasons for my decision. My reasons for it can be listed as follows. There are several reasons for my choice. ;3.概括 No matter what university you choose to study in, the writer thinks that it is important to know better about yourself and enjoy your university life. (26 words); Personally, I will choose a university that is far away from my home—the farther, the better. I have some reasons for my decision. Firstly, I love my parents, but they are too strict with me and always tell me not to do this or that. Secondly, there really aren’t a lot of new things to do in my city, so I wish I could attend a university in another province. Thirdly, I have learned to be independent and I think I