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【雅思大作文技巧】导入段的非模板写法 首先让咱们来看看雅思写作题目是什么样子的 Task: Money for postgraduate research is limited. Financial support from government should only be used for scientific research, not the less useful research . To what extent do you agree or disagree? Bad intro like this Nowadays, in contemporary society, with the rapid development of education, a much debated issue is whether government should only give financial support to scientific research not others. Some people believe government should give money to scientific research. However, for my part, this view is not convincing. 烤鸭们看到的如此标准的模板开头，是不是似曾相识之感呢？现在问你们一个简单的问题，如果不许用模板上的句式，你还会写开头么? 为什么说套模板不好呢?并不是说这些句型句式不好，而是考官已经看腻了，看到头两个词就已经猜到了你后边是怎么说的了。要知道考官每天要判N份试卷，如果没有一点新意的开头，那么首先来说，印象分就已经是负分了好么! 如何写一个考官喜欢，考生放心的开头呢? 作为一个好的雅思作文开头应该是 funnel -shapped Intro(漏斗形开头段)。由三部分组成： Background(文章背景) ↓↓↓ Paraphrase topic(改写题目) ↓↓↓ outline(表明立场) 所谓漏斗形开头段，就是从文章背景开始介绍到表明立场，一步一步的narrow down 缩小范围。这点和将来大家出国以后必然会写的学术文章是一样的。可以说雅思大作文就是精简版的学术文章。 下面就让我们一步一步的来细说说应该怎么写。 Background 作为开头中的开头，第一句话介绍背景信息的时候学会如何抓住读者。这里我们可以有三种思路来写。 1由重要事实为导向引入 As a society, we reap the rewards from academic research and experimental study in the form of technological innovations, knowledge expansion and the development of national policies, but we also help pay for them. 描述了文章背景的事实，同样也介绍了文章的大环境是怎么样的。 2由问题为导向引入 In a perfect society, money would not matter—all studies would be completely accomplished and thereby to promote the quality of living. But of course, in the real world, money is always the factor hampering the researches thought meaningless in public eyes. 有由问题为导向引入，上来就说在理想化社会中，钱不是问题，但是在现实生活中，没有钱是万万不能的。 3由例子为导向引入 During a time when many families have made financial sacrifices to make ends meet, the government still continues to spend on some studies that are thought frivolous, for example, American National Institute of Health spending taxpayers’ more than 0.3 million dollars on a study to see if mothers love dogs as much as they love kids. 这种方法属于不叫高端的高富