大学英语作文讲评.pptVIP

1. Writing Practice Directions: You are to write in 100---120 words about the title “The Two-day Weekend”. You should base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: ; The Two－day weekend The two-day weekend not only allows us to relax, but also gives us the chance to take up some hobbies. However, the two-day weekend has caused a few problems. The most serious one is that the weekdays are filled with too many lessons. Because our classes are limited to 5 days, Monday through Friday, we have to take more lessons each day than in the past. This leaves us little time to catch our breath during the weekdays. In order to benefit most from the two-day weekend, I have decided to make a good plan for that rest period. During the weekend, I will not only rest and take up some hobbies, but I will also set aside enough time to study.;点评：本文依照提纲展开，首段说明了双休日的种种好处，第二段段首的however转折的同时，也起了承前启后的作用，最后一段说明了自己将如何过好双休日的计划。; How to Deal with Cheating Many students tend to cheat during exams. Some will copy the answers from their books. Others will physically communicate with each other to get the right answers. There are even some that write down information on their hands or arms. There are several reasons for cheating. Firstly, some students just want to achieve high scores without having to work hard. Secondly, some are under great pressure and they are fearful of failing exams. Finally some are afraid that they will fall behind others in the exams. There are at least two ways to eliminate cheating. One way is to explain to students that cheating is harmful. Another way is to take strict measures to prevent cheating.;点评：本文紧扣三点提纲展开讨论，每段的首句点明了该段的主题大意，结构层次一目了然，词句运用得当。; On-campus Students’ Marrying There is a new debate: Is it legal for Chinese on-campus students to get married before they graduate? Some people say “yes” while others say “no”. In fact, the government allows on-campus students to get