高3书面表达之围绕要点扩充细节.pptVIP

——集宁一中，韩秀慧;围绕要点，补充细节;书面表达;上节作文回顾;学生习作;学生习作;学生习作;学生习作;书面表达六步法：;4 适当增加细节： 增加时间 e.g. 外出购物 I’m going out shopping . I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. 增加地点 e.g.替房东还书 I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. 发散思维? ;如何围绕要点发散思维呢？;;;;;I found some bad behavior.;; 有时去村西的小河游泳。增加条件状语 我帮助祖父母干农活。增加目的、让步状语 帮助邻里的孩子补习英语。增加手段;;;;;方法四 结尾发挥，写你的感受，评价，愿望，倡议等;;;Please improve it!;Task ; ; ; Improve it!; 参考范文 Dear Peter, I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I think I can share with her our traveling experiences, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards, Li Hua;能力提升——请适当增加细节 Yesterday I went to the Friendship Store. I saw a foreigner buying clothes. He spoke English. The shop assistant couldn’t understand him. I translated for them. They said thanks to me. I think the shop assistant should know foreign language.;Thank you！;