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2013年高中会考作文分析 09年夏天范文 本文分三段 时态为一般现在时 讲述学生的一般生活情况 Our school made a survey of the daily average amount of time high school students spend on different after-class activities. 文章总括（题目已提供） The students spend the most time,120 minutes, in doing their homework. They put about 60 minutes in enjoying entertainment, such as listening to music, watching TV and playing on the computer. (1) They spend 30 minutes in doing sports while 15 minutes goes into housework.第二段展开分述。注意标黑部分为花时间做某事的不同用法。 It is a pity that only 15 minutes is spent (被动语态)on housework. I think parents should encourage (allow, tell) their children to do more housework. (2) In this way children may learn to do their own things by themselves.最后一段写出“你自己的看法”。 备注：表示时间的另外的用法(提高版本)： （1）It takes up 30 minutes for them to do sports. （2）In this way children may learn to be more independent and responsible. 10年春天范文 本文分四段 时态为一般现在时 讲述个人现在的情况 My name is Li Hua, a Senior 2 student from Evergreen High School. I am interested in this activity so I’d like to take part in it as a volunteer. 文章开头先描述自己的一般信息，是表格的第一部分，并提出自己想要参加志愿活动 I am a member of our school’s Water-Saving Club. I can speak good English. I am in the habit of saving water and good at team work. I am sure that I can become a good helper for you. 第二段描述自己进一步的信息，为表格第二部分的内容。注意划线部分为补充的细节。内容主要是要点+细节的搭配，根据你的英语能力适当补充细节。  The world is short of water. I think I should do something for it. What’s more, it’s also a good chance for me to make more friends. 最后一段写出“你申请成为志愿者的目的”。至少写出两个目的，使得文章内容饱满。Please give me a chance, I will try my best to do a good job.文章收尾 备注：更多的参加志愿者活动的目的。（见笔记） 10年夏天范文 本文为活动类作文，讲述已经发生的活动 时态为一般过去时 Last Saturday, my class organized a volunteer activity called “Building a Green World”. 文章总括（题目已提供） My classmates and I went to the city park near our school. We did some volunteer work there. We set out at nine o’clock. After we arrived at the park, we began to work at once. Some help