六级作文培训-写作(6.5)ppt.pptVIP

*; 本次讲座共分四个模块： 战术篇：六级作文的得分技巧 战略篇：命题规律总结及模板 实战篇：结合模板进行真题演练 总结篇：六级作文备考建议;战术篇;六级作文技巧总结;大学英语六级写作评分标准;8（56）分 基本切题。有些地方表达不清，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，有些是严重错误 5（35）分 基本切题。思想表达不清，连贯性差，有较多的语言严重错误。 2（14）分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎，大部分有错误，且多数为严重错误。; 卷面整洁，书写清楚;构思简单 少犯错误;英语六级错误十错十察;2．句子成分多余;3．主谓不一致;　4．动词时态误用;　5．动词语态误用;6．词类混淆;;7．名词可数与不可数的误用;8．动词及物与不及物的误用;　9.动宾搭配不当;;　10.根据中文逐字硬译 ;;中心突出 层次分明;2006年6月六级真题作文;Traveling Abroad; In my opinion, there are at least three reasons for the above-mentioned increase. (1)First of all, the increase is closely related to the implementation of China’s opening-up policy, which has created more chances for people to go abroad. (2)What’s more, it is due to the increase of people’s income rise in X City. People are better off and can afford a trip abroad. (3)Last but not the least, the increase has a lot to do with the development of the travel industry. More and more travel agencies are attracting more people to join in their tours abroad.; According to what we have talked above, we can arrive at the conclusion naturally that traveling abroad will further promote the exchanges in economy and culture between X City and other cities in the world, meanwhile bring more opportunities for the development of X City and other cities in China.;英语文章结构三大特点：;起：nowadays, at present, first of all, firstly； 承：secondly, besides, moreover, furthermore, obviously, in addition, in other words; ;;1、列举 First of all, …;What’s more, …;Last but not the least,… 2、举例说明 Let’s take … as an excellent example.;3、强调 It　is　obvious/ apparent/ conceivable 　that As a matter of fact,…. There is no doubt that,…. 4、并列 In (the) other words ;5、对照 Contrast with... On the contrary (by contrast) On one hand,…; On the other hand,…. 6、比较 Comparatively,…. Compared with…;7、原因 Due to/Owing to/Thanks to… As a result of… 8、结果 Because of this ,….. As a result of that, … Consequently,… ;9、增加（补充） Moreover,… Furthermore (what is more),… For an addition,…. 10、结尾（总结） According to what we have talked above