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一、作文的评分标准 四级写作部分所占分值比例为15%， 标准分满分为106.5。阅卷评分时按照满分15分计算，最后，再换算成标准分。评分标准共分五个等级：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。四级写作采用总体评分方法，阅卷人员根据阅卷标准对照样卷进行评分，先就总体印象划定作文等级，然后根据具体情况对分数进行适当调整。在总体作文评分原则的指导下，四级作文的评分强调5项标准，即内容切题、表达清楚、文字连贯、句式多变和语言规范。 各分数档的具体评判标准如下： 2分条理不清，思路混乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。8分基本切题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。（注：白卷、作文与题目毫不相关或只有几个孤立的词，无法表达思想的情况下给0分。） 二、作文的得分关键： （一）结构清晰 1. 结构意义完整四级作文必需是一篇在结构和意义上都完整的文章：1）开头段交代全文主题；2）中间段围绕主题进行论述、说明或记叙；3）结尾段或总结、或提出建议、或提供解决方法等，三部分均必不可少。2、框架安排合理一般来说，四级作文都是由三个段落组成。文章的结构和各段的内容必须根据文章主题和所给提纲来确定，不能随意安排。3、主题不离中心全文各个段落都要为一个中心思想服务，而且每个段落都要围绕一个主题来展开。4、段落详略得当要根据主持关系对段落长短进行合理分配，既要避免“头重脚轻”，也要避免“头轻脚重”，各段的比例不能过分悬殊，主次详略安排要得当。（二）句式多变 一篇好的作文，必须句式丰富多变，具体体现在：长句短句搭配、主动被动合理、穿插倒装强调、句间衔接紧密（英语注重形合，要恰当地使用连接词或过渡词）。 真题示例： Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled What Electives to choose. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words following the outline given below. 1）各大学开设了各种各样的选修课 2）学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课 3）以你自己为例…… [7分作文] What Electives to Choose Now, all kinds of electives are given to the students by many universities. The sudents choose different electives because different reasons. Some like history, so they can choose history elective, some like literature, so they can choose literature elective. Because different interests, different electives are chosen by different students. Besides, some students want to learn some skills from electives. They choose they are not good at. In addition, some students like the teacher, so they choose his elective. And, some teachers have name and ability so lots of students want to choose his elective. I choose history as my elective. I like history when I was a child. History is very interesting and I learn much useful knowledge from history class. In a word, many students welcome electives warm. Electives let them use spare time better.评